CAN SOMEONE GRADE THIS GENERAL TRAINING WRITING TASK 1
To whom it may concern
I am writing to you with great dissatisfaction and regret. Allow me to elaborate why I am so perturbed. Actually, I am staying in accommodation provided by college in B wing , Room No 301 which is twin shared room and my roommate who has recently moved in, is very much self –obsessed person.
He is party lover with high music and lots of friends visting till late night everyday which causes dirty room,nasty plates,unbearable smell of left over food.Most of my things including important notes went missing. I have no comfort in sleeping and studying which is impacting my health as well as studies.
I am working hard to get my degree completed with distinction to get better chances of college placement so that I can repay my education loan. I will be really obliged if you can please provide me separate room in next term.
Hoping to receive your supporting reply,