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HI, I have got admission in NJIT for fall 2010. but because of some personal reasons i am not able to join. SO what is the procedure to postpone my admission for 1 year? Thanks in advance

I think for the first one the answer is 0.

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· Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. Automobiles, bicycles, airplanes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Automobiles, bicycles and airplanes have changed everyone’s life and had made easier to travel to different places. Everyone depend on these transportation vehicles and able to travel to any corner of the earth. However, I believe that airplanes are one of the most innovative vehicles and changed the way of transportation. I will illustrate the reasons in the following paragraphs. Firstly, by means of airplanes we can go to anywhere we want. Neither bicycle nor automobile are able to cross the oceans between countries. Airplane is the only kind of transportation we have to cross these oceans. For example, to travel to Asian countries like India from U.S.A or vice versa, we have only one option that is airplanes. And secondly, traveling in airplane is convenient and comfortable. In every airplane they serve food and have entertainment systems like TV, music systems. Many business people travel to different place for their meetings. They do not have time to relax. By both automobile and bicycle, they have to drive which requires a lot of concentration and effort. Bicycle requires even more effort than automobile. But, in an airplane they can able to relax and enjoy the travel time by listening to music or watching television. Finally, the engines in the airplane are more powerful than other transportation engines. This makes airplanes travel faster than others. As a result, airplanes take less time to reach the destination. And we do not have to spend a much time traveling. For example, if it takes 5 hours to go a city in an airplane, it takes more than one to two days to travel to the same city, from the same starting point. Bicycle takes even more time. By considering, airplanes can takes us anywhere in earth and takes less time to reach the destination and we are able to relax without worrying about the directions or traffic, airplanes have changed the people’s lives and providing us a convenient transportation option.

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I have made some changes to the above essay. Evaluate this essay please. For some people watching movies are more enjoyable and some will spend a lot of time reading. Both has some advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion, watching a movie is convenient and more enjoyable. Firstly, watching movies gives us a clearer picture about a subject or topic. We all know picture gives us more details than reading. In movies, everything will be in a visual format that gives us more information. For example, in Harry potter books there are so many imaginary things and magical items they perform. By reading the book we cannot get clearer picture. However, while watching a movie, we can know how every character is portrayed and how they preformed the magical items much clearer. Secondly, reading a book can take a lot a time and effort. We have to concentrate more to understand. Like Harry Potter or any other fictional books, there are many fictional elements that we cannot describe in words clearly. We have to concentration more to imagine the things they describe in books. In movies, we will see every detail with our eyes and gives us a better picture. So, we do not have to put much effort to concentrate to understand or do not have to imagine anything. Thus, saves us time. Moreover, we can watch a movie together with our friends and family. Parents can spend time with their children and this helps to build a strong relation with them. Although, some people argue that reading a book will improve language and can attain a good vocabulary. We can improve vocabulary and speaking skills too, while watching a movie. By considering that pictures will give us more detailed and better information about a subject/topic, does not take much effort to understand and also saves us time, I agree that watching movies are more enjoyable.

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Hi, I am taking TOEFL on April 24 so i have only 2 weeks to prepare. I am good in reading and listening but i have problem with speaking. I am ok in writing section. Give me your suggestions how can i improve my score in speaking and writing. Thanks in advance

A1 =0 A2= 1/2 *A1* 4 ==> 1/2 * 0 * 4(place A1=0) A3=1/2* A2 *4==> 1/2 *0 * 4 .................... Every term in the sequence is 0 so A100=0. wjhat is the answer?

Hai zeysin, Thank you so much for evaluating my essay. this is my 3rd essay. can you grade the essay i mean 0-6 score?

· Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific examples to explain your position. For some people watching movies are more enjoyable and for some reading is more enjoyable. Both have some advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion, I enjoy watching movies than reading a book. Firstly, for me watching movies gives me a clearer picture about a subject or topic. We all know picture gives us a more detailed view than a book. In movies, everything will be in a visual format that gives us more information about a subject. For example, in harry potter books there are so many mythical figures and magical items. By reading this book we do not know much about a character. However, while watching a movie, we can know how every character is portrayed and how they preformed the magical items much clearer. Secondly, reading a book can take a lot a time and effort. It may take 4-5 hours to finish. The movies take 2 hours to complete. Reading a book needs more concentration than watching. Thus, watching movie saves a lot of time than reading a book. Moreover, we can watch a movie with our friends and family together. It helps to build a strong relation with each other. It is not possible in case of reading a book. Although, some people argue that reading a book will improve your language and can attain a good vocabulary. We can improve language skills by reading a book and also by watching a movie. While watching a movie, we can improve vocabulary and we can improve speaking skills too. By considering that the movies will give us clearer and more detailed information than a book and movies will take less time to finish than reading a book, watching movies are more enjoyable than watching movies.

Hi san2612, Thanks for the reply.I have no idea what to write in the thrid paragraph. can you give me an example? Thanks

Thank you so much. You want me to correct (did not) in place of (didn't). can you tell me why? and also what is the problem with thrid paragraph? Is it because i mentioned the exam name??