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  1. Hi zara, We can practice speaking thr skype so my skpe id is removed by moderator; use PM system
  2. Please rate my essay.You can rate it in the range of 1 to 5 and also inform my mistakes In general, people are living stronger now.Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. Living longer! who don’t want to live for a long time.I think everyone would like to have a longer life span.But,this was not possible in earlier days.Thanks to new technologies,education and the medicines that have made impossible things possible.Thus,my paragraph contains the demonstration of these points. I believe that precaution is better than cure.To know how and what to take precaution a proper education is needed.The education has created health awareness in the people.People are taking steps to stay healthy.For example,A study show that eating lot of oily food leads to heart disease.So people have made less consumption of oily food.Therefore,education has made people to think what is good and bad for the health. In addition,technology is playing an important role in the longer span of people.The hospitals are using new technologies like scanning machine,etc to diagnose and treat a patient.These technologies are easy to operate ,and patient experience less pain.These technologies provide effective results.Hence,the invention of new technologies helped doctors to know the disease and cure it before it became serious. Further,study of medicine is increasing all over the world.There are more number of people becoming researchers and doctors.Thus,there are medicines for every disease, and doctors provide good treatment for these diseases.However,for some disease there is no proper medicine to cure,and I hope researchers will be able to find it.Therefore, people live longer because they are treated early when they have any disease. Finally,people can live long when they are given proper knowledge about the health and even new technologies and medicines are saving lives of people.Thus,people are living for longer age than the earlier people.
  3. Rate my essay Topic : Do you prefer to live in big cities or small towns In my country,agriculture was primary occupation of people and most of them practiced in small villages. Since,the development of the country began in big cities most of the people moved to these cities. The primary reasons for their shifting to cities were education,facilities and opportunity. First,schools in big cities provides a very good education. Teachers are selected depending upon their qualification and teaching abilities. Schools maintain a standard performance of each student for instance, if a student fails he is rusticated. On the other hand,schools in small town are very few in number and they hardly have separate teachers for each subjects. Therefore, people prefer big cities to get proper education . Second,big cities have more opportunities for career. There are many multinational companies,banks,etc. Schools and colleges have many fields to study. People get a wide range of options to choose as their career and move forward to work in it. People get chance to work as an interne when they are in college. This help know their area of interest and increases their confidence. Finally,big cities have all facilities which are easily available. For example, to go to school or colleges there are bus facilities and even there is no power cut. However,small towns faces all these problems because they are not developed . In conclusion,there are more benefits for people living in big cities than small towns. It is necessary to live in big cities in order to get good education,all facilities and more opportunities in life.
  4. THis is essay for TOEFL Independent writing please rate it. Topic: Do you prefer to live in small towns or big cities. In my country,agriculture was primary occupation of people and most of them practiced in small villages. Since,the development of the country began in big cities most of the people moved to these cities. The primary reasons for their shifting to cities were education,facilities and opportunity. First,schools in big cities provides a very good education. Teachers are selected depending upon their qualification and teaching abilities. Schools maintain a standard performance of each student for instance, if a student fails he is rusticated. On the other hand,schools in small town are very few in number and they hardly have separate teachers for each subjects. Therefore, people prefer big cities to get proper education . Second,big cities have more opportunities for career. There are many multinational companies,banks,etc. Schools and colleges have many fields to study. People get a wide range of options to choose as their career and move forward to work in it. People get chance to work as an interne when they are in college. This help know their area of interest and increases their confidence. Finally,big cities have all facilities which are easily available. For example, to go to school or colleges there are bus facilities and even there is no power cut. However,small towns faces all these problems because they are not developed . In conclusion,there are more benefits for people living in big cities than small towns. It is necessary to live in big cities in order to get good education,all facilities and more opportunities in life.
  5. Hi Lani, Give me ur skype id even I want to join you to practice toefl.
  6. Hi friends, I am interested to practice TOEFL speaking.Even we can discuss about vocabulary,summary and writing integrated essays. I think by discussing we can improve.We can discuss through skype so please tell me where should I give my skype and where will I get your skype address. Please reply soon we have little time.
  7. hi, we can practice toefl on skype.When u are taking the test.
  8. Hey, I am giving Toefl on Sept 11.I would like to practice speaking section.So any one interested join me.
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