Hannaht

Hi there my name is hannah. I was wandering if you could please help me. i know this forum is for the SAT test but i am in Australia so this is actually for my STAT test which is very similar. i have not been to school in a long time and can not remember at all how to write an essay. please help. they have given me a sample topic to do a practice essay on. It is ment to be a formal argumentative essay. i sort of feel like i have completely gone off topic and some of it doesnt make sense? so please tell me the truth thank you!! here it is- topic- Education is the greatest force for change and offers the greatest opputunity for hope about the future of our society. essay- Education is the greatest force for change and offers the greatest opputunity for hope about the future of our society. Without education how is it possible for us to learn and grow as people and as a society? We would not be able to better our lives and our world without education. To change our lives for the better, we need to learn from our past mistakes. Being well educated in our country's history can help us to make better decisions for our country in the future. To be educated in history and knowing our country extremely well will help us to make the right decisions for our future. If the history is unknown then we are likely to continue to make the same mistakes and cause the same problems that we had in the past. Technology is a huge factor in the way we live today and without education there is no way of expanding our knowledge on technology. Just look at the technology in our hospitals, it is because of these machines and medicines that we are able to save many lives and keep many people healthy. We need to keep educating ourselves so we are able to find cures for diseases, invent technology to help those with health issues and to keep the people of our future society alive, healthy and happy. With education we are able to learn about different countrys and the way that they live, learn about other religions and their beliefs, and are able to learn many different languages. With this we are able to relate and communicate with other people around the world, we are able to understand their way of living and learn better ways to live. we can better our future by working together with other countries. This is not possible without education. Without education, who would grow to be teachers helping our kids to learn? Who would grow to be Doctors saving peoples lives and keeping us healthy? Education is so important to the future of our society. Education helps us grow and change for the better. That is all! please tell me the truth i will not be offended :) Thank you!!! Hannah