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Hi, everyone I do my best to get the best in TOEFL, I hope if some one just commented about my essay, How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer The invention for television and movies influenced peopl's behavior so much, wether that behavior was good or bad, they make them have new habits, new clothes and new information, I will clear up the effects one by one, and I will focus to tell the effections regardless they were good or bad, let us to begin. Firstly, those media affected the invidual' behavior, specially the young of them, for example when the young people watch movies like Super Man and Spider Man they try to do what they have saw in the movie, they will jump from high place which might harm them, I remember when I was a child I tried to imitate some dangerous scene, but I was injured in my head, and I stayed for one month at the hospital, that was bad influent. secondly, the people when watch the famous people in the tv like Tom Cruez, David Beckham, or Madonna, they try to imitate their hairstyle and wear like them, those are absulotley obvious impact, Thirdly, we obtain the information from the tv with picture which increase the information's affection, form example we watch the famine that happen in Africa as a result we feel with them, then we will offer aid, whether that was as a money, food or clothes As I illustrated the tv and the movie have huge affect to the people, they make him do what they saw, wear the clothes whose the stars wear, they make him know about the bad or good news, those make them do some thing accordingly to what they saw, I do not think that there is someone can deny this statments. 294 WORDS thanks

I do not need correction, this is essay for TOEFL, I need someone to grade it , please Mr, Tino grade my essay. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Coaches are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. The question is do you agree or disagree about being the coaches the best teachers, the answer will differ from people to another people, I think the coaches are not the best teachers because they care about money more than the student's advantage, they do not fear of the punishment, because there is not supervision to him, and they do not have certified skills, I will explain my reasons. first they care about mony so much because they agree with the student for money not anything else, but on the other hand, the teachers will not care about money because they will take their money from the school as monthly salary, I remember some story hapenned to me when I was in my intermediate school, I agreed with some coache to teach me mathimatics, but after the agreement, he phoned me the next day and told me I can not teach you because I my schedule disallow, I was angry and what increased my anger that I knew after one week that the coach agreed with an other student because that student paid money more much than me. Second, the coach will not be afraid of you, he can cheat you in the information, he can cancel his agreement like what happend with me and he can delay the class, because he know you can not go to his manager like what you do in a school. Third, you can not trust in those coaches because most of them do not have a certificate, consequently,they can not explain the subject like the teachers, we know the teachers can not become a teacher without passing many exams, I think this enough to prefer the teachers to the coaches. As I have illustrated, the teachers better than the coaches one thousand time, for your advantage do not go to the coaches, they will take your money and wast your time as a result you will be the loser, do you want to be a loser.

.but I need just someone to grade me in writing section and speaking section , He just gives some directions and the email quite enough for that I mean I will send my essays and my mp3 speaking by email to grade them and direct me just , I am willing to pay 20 dollars for a month do you accept , this replay for you or any teacher will accept that, I wait your answer today , because my test on 24th February. thanks

Hello teacher, this is my essay I hope you to make commentary and to give me notices about the essay why go to university ( this question from book -answer to all over essay questions and not clear if the question means the people or mean me in the question ) ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. There are many reasons for people to go to university, but that depends the people themselves, some people go for educational cuases, some for financial cuases and some go to the university to become famous , personally speaking I go to university to gain the knowledge, to know about the world around me and to help my society, I will spell out my reasons . Firstly, I have passion to know about the world around me, for example when I hear news in the television about some pheneomena, I alwasy ask myself why this happened, these moments intesify my interesting in the education, subsequently I wish strongly to go to university, Secondly, I have sense of community and I wish to serve my community , for example we know about the deseases in the poverty countries like my country, I am from Mansoora near Cairo, my city like my country there is lack of knowledge about the deseases and how the people can gaurd themselves from deases, espescially the children,that assures the need to go to unviersity. As I illustrated, I go to the university to increas my knowledge and develop my skills and to help my society from the problems which it faces, I hope if we help every one to go into university that is good for the person and the group -society-, do you agree with me?. ................................................. word count 230............................................................................................................................................................. . I observed some problem like cuase but after I finish 30 minutes , I feel I can do better than what I did, I am sure about that

Hello everybody I need YOU to tell me about some teacher or some site to grade me every time no problem if this service is paid do yo know about paid site give this service if you tell me about THIS forum i think THIS forum not enough because maybe you need to wait 3 days to get help these time i will write daily essays i need to know about the progress i will do thanks thanks thanks

Thank you very much , you have helped me a lot because i need to know my level before i begin focus on writing and speaking but , what the biggest problem i have in my essay , i want to work more but in my weakness thank you again

please , please , help me , this the begging I will know my level and I will decide what I will do

sorry but there is not mistake in spaces but I copied the essay from word , almost the problem from the site or the browser for example Thequestion ,folloingstatement,Personallyspeaking , almost in the begging from every line please grade without care about this mistakes

Hello everybody I wrote my essay depending some good book this is my first essay I correct it with office word but I kept the mistakes I need you to grade my next essay ........................................................................................................................................................................ Thequestion is do you agree or disagree with the folloingstatement? Personallyspeaking, I agree that the student mustlike the teacher , that important to learn and benifit fromthe teacher , i will state my reasons First,ifthe student liked his teacher he will love to come to the classevery day that means he will learn very good ,for example I likedEnglish teacher in the primary school , hE was love his class as he told us , and he was the best in the all school ,forthat I was always think about his class when I be in my home andduring the other lessons ,that made me very good in English . Second,as student you will be so interesting to do the homework , ihave story , i remeber some friend was carlessabout his homework when i advise him he was tell me that Heunderstand me but the problem bad with him consequently he hates histeacher and he doesn't want to do the homework ,this clarifysthe importance to good relation and good feeling between the studentand the teacher. lastand not the least , the student will make high degrees in theteacher's subject because he will bemore attractive during the lesson. Tosum up , I agree when the student likes his teacher he will learnmore and more from his teacher , doyou agree with me? begin now and try to respect your teacher andimprove you relation with him . ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................. word count 261 and I hope to give me comments and advice If you want I can summarize the information in that book thank you in advance

thanks but i need to improve speaking skill before i begin

Hello everybodyi am now in bangalore india began course toefl do you have any suggestions to help mei need conversation with other person more than anything else thanks