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Hi, Find below the corrections in your essay. It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both views and give your opinion. People have different views about becoming a professional in certain fields such as sport and music. Although there are good arguments in favor of inherited skills that are considered a vital to be a good sportsman or musician, I personally believe that anyone can be a professional by training. There is a group of people claiming that well-known and talented people are born with certain skills. They assert that being good at some fields comes from one’s genes. A good example of this can be Ronaldo or Messi. These football players are exceptionally talented that no one can reach their power and performance in spite of hard training sessions. This means that this sort of people are gifted. As such, famous musician like Bethoven or Motzart can be included to this list. They had unordinary musical talent that not many people possess. Another group, by contrast, feel that everyone can be taught to be a skilled in music or sport. They concede that everybody has a capability of being a good sportsman or composer. To take the famous Hollywood sportsman and actor-Silvester Stallone as an example, he was very weak physically in his childhood that everyone laughed at him. However, later on, he trained hard and eventually became such a strong sportsman. Hence, it is felt that a human-being can do anything, if he or she has an intention for it .To sum up, while there are some convincing points about being skillful hereditary, from my perspective, however, a hard work and deduction is a key to become a professional in any field. The portions marked in Bold Letters need changes. Below are the instructions on how to change the sentences: That are considered vital to become a good sportsperson… (‘a’ is not needed before vital) Beethoven or Mozart (the spellings are incorrect) Extraordinary (not unordinary) Taught the skills required to be good at sports or music Sylvester Stallone (the spelling is incorrect) That he had become a laughing stock for everyone One of the most eminent sportsperson It can be seen that a human being can do anything Hard work and dedication Score- 5/9 Thank you Mnemonic Team

Hi, It is highly recommended to have some research experience or work experience before applying to a PhD program. It is research based and the highest degree conferred by any university around the world. As you do not have any research/work experience I would advise you to go for MS program. Please get in touch with us at ............ so we could help you in shortlisting your universities. Thank you Mnemonic Team

Hi, There are no Tuition-Free universities in the USA, but there are many universities where you have an option to get full scholarship under graduate fellowship program and as a teaching/research assistant. The scholarships are awarded on merit basis. Applicants need to have a very strong profile to apply and qualify for a merit based scholarship. Apart from this many universities in the USA do offer assistance to apply for need based scholarship. Thanks Mnemonic Team

Hi, First of all GRE 308 is a good score, so congratulations! I can see that you do have a good profile in terms of academic—assuming you scored GPA of 3.7/4 which is excellent. Apart from this you have a substantial work exp of 3 years along with college projects, certificates and medals which does make you a strong applicant to apply for MS in Computer Science. Some univ. You may look into are: Purdue, SUNY, Cal. State univ, NYU poly, Penn state Thanks Mnemonic Team

Hi, For the first one,it is a good introduction yet I feel that there is a lot of scope of improvement. Below is a suggestion. A better introduction: Libraries are known to be the best sources of knowledge enhancement. The fact whether public libraries should only provide books or high tech media is a controversial one. I believe that accumulation of knowledge can be offered by various sources and one needs to stay abreast with latest technological advancements in order to broaden one’s perspective. Therefore, I personally believe that the libraries should strike a perfect balance between providing the classics i.e. books for those who prefer the method of pen and paper along with software and videos too for the newer generation who wish to read or learn through a more visual way. For the Second one This question does not require you take up a position. Since it has asked for your opinion on both the sides of the issue, make sure you give your opinion for both the aspects and not choose one to support. Thanks And Regards Mnemonic Education Team

Hi, Students after doing BA/BS in Psychology can apply to universities abroad for a Masters in Psychology. Some universities require experience but most do not. It is always recommended that you do have some sort work experience, research project, published paper or any other psychology related experience where you can demonstrate your interest in applying for the master’s level program but is not a mandatory requirement. So you may apply to universities abroad for your MS in Psychology without a work experience. Countries like USA and CANADA require GRE along with TOEFL rest of the universities mostly just require TOEFL/IELTS. For further information please feel free to contact. Thank You Mnemonic Team

Hi..... The argument’s main content is appealing though it lacks a proper introduction and conclusion. Start the essay by stating how logically convincing you find it In the next paragraph, elaborate on the first reason (either by attacking the assumption or by pointing out the lack of information). Note that the primary reason must be the most evident loophole in the essay. In your essay for instance, you can say- the author fails to consider the tribes other than the Palean who could have been capable of making similar hand woven baskets. The third paragraph should have the next reason that you could find to argue with the author and throw more light on it. End it with a proper conclusion. All in all your essay should be a comprehensive one with four paragraphs, solid content and coherent organization. Hope this helps!! Thanks and regards Mnemonic Team

Hi ... Your reasoning is correct. Instead of getting into multiple complexities, just remember the below concepts. These should help you save time and adopt a clear concise approach: Any equation in IxI Any equation in modulus can be switched to opposite sign equation and such switch would not have any impact on the solution. For eg: |-x| > b is same as |x| > b, |a-x| > b is same as |x-a| > b Thanks Mnemonic Team