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  1. Considering your first essay I would say it is Ok,if you have written it with in time frame. There are many grammar mistakes and punctuation mistakes. (missing comma). I have pointed out a few. woven basket is called Palean baskets nearby not near by this does not mean and not this is does not use of transitional words is good. Add some more points to conclusion.Last paragraph seems incomplete with just two lines. Good luck with your future endeavours!
  2. I think you a way away from the topic they are asking "Should all students before entering college i.e upto high school should study same curriculam or not ? And not about number of courses to be included in college.. Points for brain storming : **Students from backward parts of nation where syllabus is not in par with rest of nation are left behind at times of college admission. **To maintain,update and revise curriculum on a centralized basis is more effective and feasible. **Very beneficial for students who needs to change schools like kids whose parents are in defense. **Teacher training program can be centralized and more effective ,they can also teach nation wide. We can have one or two optional subjects like regional language or a few chapters in history can be decided by schools themselves. http://revisedgrebootup.blogspot.in
  3. hi, amity = freindly relationship. Mutability = being capable of mutation(changing of a structure of a gene). others are quite self explanatory. You can comfortably notice there is only one synonym pair and that' s also the only one that seems relevant. So,while hitting at Sentence Equivalence Read question Sentence. Think of a word on your own,no need to worry here if you can't think of something. Try to find a synonym pair most of the times their are two synonym pair. One would seem to be relevant to topic. Shivsonal.
  4. I think you could be more broad in your first paragraph "Particularly, it can be seen that technology mediums can be used to interact within institutions and allow effective communication to employers."and you just didn't mention mobile communcation I wonder ....You also need to improve upon your sentence formation
  5. While looking for SC answers we should try to find contrast if any in the sentence. Whereas is telling us a contrast between the two parts of sentence first,again it refers to "reverse trend" that means whats happening in "electronic technology" individualism to interdependence in "medieval" reverse thing was happening. So, we shoud have word related to interdependance in the blank. From the given options we can make out only corporate "of or belonging to a united group; joint" is related to interdependance and so the answer.
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