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  1. [TABLE=width: 97%] [TR] [TD=class: copy-bold-light, width: 100%, align: center][/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=class: copy, align: center][TABLE=width: 100%] [TR] [TD=class: copy, align: left][TABLE=width: 98%] [TR] [TD=class: copy, colspan: 2][/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=class: copy, width: 85%]"Regulators and policymakers should respond to potential environmental threats even before the information is fully known or concrete."[/TD] [TD=class: copy, width: 15%, align: right][TABLE] [TR] [TD=align: center][TABLE=width: 10] [TR] [TD=bgcolor: #D2E4F8, align: center][TABLE=width: 23%] [TR] [TD]http://www.800score.com/images/time_left_block.gif[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=bgcolor: #D2E4F8, align: center][/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=bgcolor: #D2E4F8, align: center]http://www.800score.com/images/pause.gif[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=class: copy]How would you rate the accuracy of the above statement? Support your position with reasons and examples.[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Regulators and policymakers should respond to potential environmental threat before the information is fully known since damaging of it is a irreversible process . Hence i agree with the above view. Over the years we have destroyed our environment in such a scale that its effect are visible now. Climatic changes ( global warming ), extinction of some species of animals are such effects. If an official have knowledge about some project which has slightest hindrance to the environment should scrutinize the project . If this is done in the initial days, then changes are easily accommodated otherwise reverse happens. For example , like in the case of Narmada dam project of Gujarat state in India , its potential threat was listed in initial phase . It has created danger for the people living around the dam area since water level would increase . So to avoid this , the government took necessary step for rehabilitation of such people to alternative place . Hence the risk was averted and project was implemented inspite of having threats which was resolved due to officials intervention. Secondly , let us look into example of nuclear power plants which are planned for installation at some places. If regulators do not respond at earliest time its consequences are enormous. Appropriate land need to be given , nuclear waste handling , calamity prevention measures and stringent laws if any rules are not followed ; all such things are to be taken into account before actual project information is available. Ignoring such things would led to tragedy such as Bhopal gas tragedy which shocked the world in 1984 where laws are mishandled and people suffered. Contrary to the above view , an action take at early stage might be flaw if proper information cannot be known and hence its interpretation could be debated . But in general environment related things should be taken in a cautious manner as already we have destroyed the nature to an extreme level. If proper steps would have taken at an earlier stage then Hiroshima and Nagasaki would have never faced the atomic explosion after effects . Till now its generation are facing problem ranging from health issues to physical deformation of body parts. At last , I would like to conclude that environment regulator should be extremely cautious for the coming generation since we have damaged our environment a lot . Hence we need to take steps to stop this destruction process and look into measures to replete our environment resources by having effect environment friendly policies.
  2. Thanks for your tips , I have even written my second essay , it will be nice if you can review that also :)
  3. Please provide your valuable feedback so that i can improve upon, my exams is in next month , it will help me .
  4. Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position Answer : The issue is pertaining to role of educational institution in the success of students. Whether they should support/encourage their student in pursuing the fields of study which these institution feel as insurmountable. I am of the opinion , a grown up individual has full rights to his own dreams and goals so as to pursue his field of study with great interest. Let me put forward example of Albert Einstein. During his school days , he was thought as of stupid by his teacher . But he was passionate about Physics and Mathematics , which eventually lead to development of many theories which are of curiosity till now. If he wouldn't have followed his interest , then the whole world would have been different. Furthermore , we have real life experiences of sportsman like Sachin Tendulkar who left his educational career to pursue his interest in sports and the rest is history. If he would followed as to what is followed as success mantra of life by conditioned individual , he would not have explored his skills and his potential would have been untapped. On the contrary it can be said following interests may not yield fruitful result . But it doesn't mean , that it will never yield result . Failure is one face of result and should be accepted with same manner as we enjoy success . Thomas Alva Edison invented light after many failure , if he wouldn't have been gracious enough to accept failure , then his efforts would have been in vain. So it can be concluded based on examples and their achievements , that success is a relative term , as in thousand failure might be resulting into a success equivalent to big discovery or inventions . So it is necessary for an individual to follow his interest even when the whole world is against you since your passion might prove them wrong.
  5. Hey you have used your vocabulary skills and even punctuation's at right places. But all said , the key flaws( though i may be wrong since its my personal views ) are : 1. Your first paragraph doesn't give a clear idea of your stand . It only becomes evident after reading subsequent paragraph. So it feels you are having neutral stand. 2. Fourth paragraph related to cities and branding are not very much clear thereby creating some sort of uncertainity. Hope this review helps , do review my essay too :) . All the best :)
  6. Hey thanks for your useful tips , if you can elaborate more on how to elaborate my essay since I stuck on some points . It will be helpful if you can list out some points for me . Anyways thanks for your reviewing .
  7. Hello everybody , please i have GRE exam next month , so if you can help me in rating my essay and giving tips to improve it , it will be helpful
  8. Question :As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position. Answer : I disagree with above mentioned issue since I believe inventions are the root cause which lead to our evolution otherwise we would have been in Stone Age for the rest of time . Over period , inventions have evolved us and with our inventions we have reached till Moon as well as explored our galaxy. For justifying let us take an example of steam engine. This wonderful invention have connected us with different parts of world and we helped us in reaching shorter span of time. And if inventions , were stopped , we would not have invented aerial transport such as aeroplane invented by Wright Brothers . In short , over period of time our needs have led to many inventions without which our life would have been incomplete . Imagine a life without telephone , television how would an efficient communication happen without such inventions. Contrary , inventions have also disturbed our human thinking in some manner, that I will confess. Such as usage of calculators in such a manner that one would not do simple calculations that people of previous generation could do easily. But these defects are minimal and could be controlled with our will and our dedication. But if inventions would have ruined our thinking , than there might have been extremely chaotic , unruly world. In fact over the years , inventions have taught us and we have learned and improved , with eager of making human world more efficient , intelligent and productive.
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