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  1. Thanks a lot Suyash for checking my essay. I will sure overcome the mentioned points.
  2. Can someone please suggest me changes or correction in the following essay. I am not good in English but tries to write an issue essay Issue Essay Topic: As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position. Essay The present age is the age of technology. It is difficult to image the world without technology. Technology has become our part of life. But still a serious issue arises that whether technology has deteriorated the ability of human thinking for themselves or not. A question arises, who created the Technology and answer to this question is obviously humans created technology as majority humans have an ability to find various way to complete their tasks efficiently. Hence we cannot claim that technology has deteriorated thinking ability of humans. Humans have an ability to find various shortcuts to accomplish their work. They may complete their work using either by technology or manually. Using that technology they can overcome flaws in that technology and try to overcome it by various techniques. They are not bound to get struck in existing technology but try to invent new ones. Some works cannot be accomplished by technology. They may also require human interaction. Technology is completely event driven and the event are generated by humans. Taking an example of constructing a Building, First of all a blue print or a plan is developed using some computer applications. These applications generate plan based on user input not just on a button click. Users think over many circular issues for constructing a building and hence give instructions in the form of user input to these computer application and they get the plan as per there input and get it quickly and accurately which is much difficult while being generated by humans brain. As it is said technology also creates unlimited number of challenges as compared to manually created challenges. A Tennis player while practicing uses an automated machine which throws a ball in any direction which is unknown to the player randomly and for as many number of time. As the player face the ball in any direction he learns how to tackle the ball in actual match. But if the same technique is used by replacing machine with human, the player could know the direction of the ball and hence cannot develop much. Same is the case used in solving computer generate Riddles, quizzes and mathematical games which also develop ability of an individual to face the various sort of challenges. One of the most famous criticism that use of calculator decrease human ability to calculate simple mathematical problems. Yes, it does decrease the ability to solve simple calculations but our organizations restrict the use of calculator in schools which tend to make the students use their brain for calculating the mathematical problems. Also solving complex mathematical expression requires human interaction and till date no such tool is developed to tackle such complex expressions. Also there is a criticism that use of technology makes a person lazy. This argument makes no sense as it is mentioned in this passage human mind is always active and it finds various ways to sort out the difficulties. Now it is up to the individual to be lazy or not. We cannot blame technology as a question arises, before technologies invention there were no lazy people, well that’s the point which cannot prove technology makes a person lazy. It is impossible to stop the use of technology as it is a part of the life of an individual. The criticism will exist. Each and every thing as both sides, some good while some bad. If better side is taken into consideration, the ability of humans to think for themselves will not deteriorate.
  3. I have written one Issue Essay. I am not good in English. Please can someone suggest the changes in below essay. Issue Essay Topic: As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position. Essay The present age is the age of technology. It is difficult to image the world without technology. Technology has become our part of life. But still a serious issue arises that whether technology has deteriorated the ability of human thinking for themselves or not. A question arises, who created the Technology and answer to this question is obviously humans created technology as majority humans have an ability to find various way to complete their tasks efficiently. Hence we cannot claim that technology has deteriorated thinking ability of humans. Humans have an ability to find various shortcuts to accomplish their work. They may complete their work using either by technology or manually. Using that technology they can overcome flaws in that technology and try to overcome it by various techniques. They are not bound to get struck in existing technology but try to invent new ones. Some works cannot be accomplished by technology. They may also require human interaction. Technology is completely event driven and the event are generated by humans. Taking an example of constructing a Building, First of all a blue print or a plan is developed using some computer applications. These applications generate plan based on user input not just on a button click. Users think over many circular issues for constructing a building and hence give instructions in the form of user input to these computer application and they get the plan as per there input and get it quickly and accurately which is much difficult while being generated by humans brain. As it is said technology also creates unlimited number of challenges as compared to manually created challenges. A Tennis player while practicing uses an automated machine which throws a ball in any direction which is unknown to the player randomly and for as many number of time. As the player face the ball in any direction he learns how to tackle the ball in actual match. But if the same technique is used by replacing machine with human, the player could know the direction of the ball and hence cannot develop much. Same is the case used in solving computer generate Riddles, quizzes and mathematical games which also develop ability of an individual to face the various sort of challenges. One of the most famous criticism that use of calculator decrease human ability to calculate simple mathematical problems. Yes, it does decrease the ability to solve simple calculations but our organizations restrict the use of calculator in schools which tend to make the students use their brain for calculating the mathematical problems. Also solving complex mathematical expression requires human interaction and till date no such tool is developed to tackle such complex expressions. Also there is a criticism that use of technology makes a person lazy. This argument makes no sense as it is mentioned in this passage human mind is always active and it finds various ways to sort out the difficulties. Now it is up to the individual to be lazy or not. We cannot blame technology as a question arises, before technologies invention there were no lazy people, well that’s the point which cannot prove technology makes a person lazy. It is impossible to stop the use of technology as it is a part of the life of an individual. The criticism will exist. Each and every thing as both sides, some good while some bad. If better side is taken into consideration, the ability of humans to think for themselves will not deteriorate.
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