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  1. I would be grateful if someone correct my speeling and grammars mistakes. People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreng country. Most of people love traveling to other countries and even in their own country, and it is really important in people life because it is the moment that they relax after a years of hard work, meet their friends and families and have the opportunity to know beautiful places around the world. I think this can depend on different needs and priorities compare to a person who intends to same money or know a specific place or building that do not exist in their country. Generally speaking, I believe that it is better for all concerned if people travel to their own country, particularly if they look for cheaper trips and beautiful places. First of all, it is important to consider much money one can spend in their trip. Certainly, it is possible to travel abroad and save money for example when you intend to buy electronics and clothes, because in my county is cheaper to buy this things from other countries. On the other hand, these days it cost a lot to travel abroad. By way of example, I live in Brazil and the dollar is so expensive, so is more likely to travel in my own country to save money. In addition to the importance of finances, I think this is better to know our own culture. For example, Brazil is an amazing place to visit, there are a lot of attraction. Of course, some people plan their tips to know famous buildings and architectures from other countries. For instance, Pyramid of Egypt, Coliseum and so on . However, I think it would be fair to say that for most people they are more likely to visit their own culture and famous landscapes. Namely, we have warm all over the year and because of that to travel to board cities is a very good idea, and the famous one is Copacabana. Besides that, we have Amazonia Forest, which is the greater forest in the world. I can recall a trip a made to Rio de Janeiro, I had a lot of fun in Copacabana beach and after that I visited the state of Chirst and It was so nice because I took a pictures with the Christ and the view from the top of the mountain was amazing By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above. I am of the opinion that in most cases it is actually more beneficial for most people to travel in our own country.
  2. Would you please correct the grammar, speeling and other mistakes. Besides that, I would be grateful if someone who have already taken the test make some comments about it content.. Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. The Internet has changed today's life. As such, some people are more likely to gain valuable information instantly from this technology, while others claim that they feel lost with so many information. All things together, I believe that the internet has more advantages than disadvantages, and I will discuss it in my essay. First, before internet was invented people search information on books. To clarify, books are a very good way to get information but it takes more time to get ones questions solved. Differ from the internet, which has some famous websites, such as, Google and Yahoo, where we can find an answer for almost everything. For example, my father studied medicine thirty years ago and at this time internet had not been invented. So, he studied with books, and he says he had read hundreds of books during his college to get his doubts clarified. He says that after internet was invented to study medicine or other subjects were much easier because it is easier to find information on internet than in books. This example clearly shows that internet make search easier and cheaper. Second, at the same time that this famous websites make search easier, one cannot trust 100% on it. In other words, anyone can post everything and in some cases the information is not correct. For instance, another famous websites is called "wikepedia", the information which is posted on this website is provided by normal people while the information on books is provided by specialized authors. So, everybody need to take care when they search things online for papers and homeworks. In addition, everybody need to be in mind that when we search on internet we need to know who is the author of the information. To conclude, internet is there to help students to get information fast and for free. However, we need to take care with the origin of this information, because sometimes it can be wrong or not 100% correct.
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