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Technology is always changing and has evolved from one form to another to make human life much easier. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]You have provided a thesis statement for your introduction. A few grammatical errors. [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Firstly, when we speak about science and technology, we sometimes criticize the negative attributes it brings upon human lives. Smartphones equipped with internet, is one of the major implementations created to mankind. Some parents believe that it will bring about destruction towards our younger generation, which can affect them socially, emotionally, and mentally. I personally believe that technology is not healthy, for our younger generation. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]Try to use the word speak instead of the word ‘’told’’. You have provided valid points to justify your theory. Try to use transition words to begin your sentence. [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Secondly,the current trend in the smartphone industry is creating the device with exceptional features that eventually attracts the younger generation. Definitely, students will lose all interest academically, because all their interest is conveyed to an electrical device. Students should be barred from using their smartphones whilst learning is taking place. When I was a child, there was lack of communication, we were not fortunate enough to have mobile devices, but still our parents were less worried as they could still be in touch with us via a telephone. So, parents can make a decision to remove any mobile devices for the sake of their child’s wellbeing. The government has implemented new rules related to the usage of mobile devices whilst driving. As the young students are more reluctant to the side effects of mobile devices, it would become the parent’s responsibility to be stricter on the usage of a mobile device. Social networking has destroyed many teenagers lives, teenagers have been living a virtual life, which has led to suicide. In conclusion a mobile device can make one anti sociable, which can lead to depression. This is our future generation let’s make a change as parent’s, and implement rules related to the usage of mobile devices for our children.

Hello, I know this is late, but maybe it will help others Technology is always changing and has evolved from one form to another to make human life much easier. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]You have provided a thesis statement for your introduction. A few grammatical errors.[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Firstly, when we speak about science and technology, we sometimes criticize the negative attributes it brings upon human lives. Smartphones equipped with internet, is one of the major implementations created to mankind. Some parents believe that it will bring about destruction towards our younger generation, which can affect them socially, emotionally, and mentally. I personally believe that technology is not healthy, for our younger generation. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]Try to use the word speak instead of the word ‘’told’’. You have provided valid points to justify your theory. Try to use transition words to begin your sentence. [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Secondly,the current trend in the smartphone industry is creating the device with exceptional features that eventually attracts the younger generation. Definitely, students will lose all interest academically, because all their interest is conveyed to an electrical device. Students should be barred from using their smartphones whilst learning is taking place. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]Try to be concise when constructing your paragraph. Try to use punctuation where needed. For example a comma should be added before the word ‘’because’’ Try to use transition words.[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] When I was a child, there was lack of communication, we were not fortunate enough to have mobile devices, but still our parents were less worried as they could still be in touch with us via a telephone. So, parents can make a decision to remove any mobile devices for the sake of their child’s wellbeing. The government has implemented new rules related to the usage of mobile devices whilst driving. As the young students are more reluctant to the side effects of mobile devices, it would become the parent’s responsibility to be stricter on the usage of a mobile device. Social networking has destroyed many teenagers lives, teenagers have been living a virtual life, which has led to suicide. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]You have provided substantial information to justify your theory. A few grammatical errors. I like the fact that you related this theory to your ow up bringing when you were a teenager.[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] In conclusion a mobile device can make one anti sociable, which can lead to depression. This is our future generation let’s make a change as parent’s, and implement rules related to the usage of mobile devices for our children. [TABLE] [TR] [TD]You have provided a restatement of the thesis statement written in the introduction. Try to read your sentences before submission, this will allow you to notice your mistakes written.[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Enjoy this free review. You can get more free review by taking a TOEFL practice test TOEFL Practice Test

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