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  1. Thank you Awhig, I got a great help in writing from you.
  2. Gave my Toefl Today. :) L-26 S-9-27 R-27 range-207-267 Essay topic was ok. Hopefuly I will get good score in that. Thanks a lot Erin for this great Forum. I Got a big help from this forum. Once again thanks a lot to all who had rated my essays and gave me suggestions. Those suggestions were really helpful to increase my writting skills. Rachana
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    hi please rate it

    thanks to all of you for giving suggestions...hopefully i will do better in the next one Thanks Rachana
  4. Topic: - When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. If someone wants to complain about any product or about any service, then there are two ways to complain. Some people prefer to complain in writing, because they find that way more comfortable, while some people prefer to complain in person. I always prefer latter way. In my opinion to complain in person about any product or about any service has more impact on opposite person than to complain in writing. The reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point of view. First of all complaint in person about any product or about any service has more impact on opposite person. For example if you complain about any particular product personally, you can discuss properly about that product with opposite person. You can present your point properly like why you don't like this product, what the problems it is causing and so on. Moreover you can listen what the opposite person is saying, what are his opinions about that and then if you find his points are not agreeable then you can keep your points again more firmly, which make a lot of impact on opposite person and may be he can agree about your points. In contrary to complain in writing doesn't make that impact on other person because many times he just read the complaint letter or mail and thinks “ok I will work on it”, but many times there is no guarantee like whether your complaint will really be considered or not. Secondly the way of complaining personally works faster than the other way, because in this way if opposite person agree on your complaint, then he can solve your problem immediately. But complain in writing always takes lot of time. For example last week I had cooling problem in my refrigerator, so I complain about it by leaving a note at our housing office, but no one showed up that day to fix that problem. Then next day I complained it personally and after half an hour my refrigerator got fixed. In conclusion, complaining personally has more benefits. Moreover this way is faster, easier than other method. So I always prefer to complain personally rather than to complain in writing.
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    hi please rate it

    Topic: -“When people succeed. It is because of their hard work Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above. This is a very interesting topic and also very debatable. Some people think that luck plays the most important part in their success while others think that hard work is the main reason for the success. I would agree with the latter. One of the most famous scientists known to mankind is Isaac Newton. Newton was extremely brilliant and many important discoveries ranging from calculus to laws of motion. One of the famous quotations of Newton is “In success, luck plays only 1 percent while hard work plays 99 Percent.” This saying itself represents Newton’s attitude towards success. One can also learn from very exceptional athletes. Most of them work 18 hours a day. They try their best to make them perfect. This is possible only when one puts in hard work. Luck hardly plays any role in outcomes and we know that practice makes man perfect. Hard work helps people to make themselves perfect in their field. If you don’t study before exams and just keep on believing on your luck, then you will easily fail. But if you work hard, there is very rare chance that you will not succeed. By looking at all the examples of all famous people, I still believe that hard work is the only way to achieve success in life.
  6. Topic:-What discovery in last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Since last 100 years many inventions has been made, many technological development has been done, which results in easier, efficient and fastest life. I think discovery of automobile is the one that has been not only beneficial to my country but also to all over the world. Discovery of automobile has made many useful changes in my country. It has reduced traveling time period, it has increased communication, and overall economic revolutionary in my country. Before invention of automobile, there were other several ways of communications, but they were time consuming. Invention of automobile has made traveling from one place to other easier, faster and less time consuming. It also results in development of roads, street and highways and thus change overall infrastructure of my country. It made my country more organized. Secondly discovery of automobile has made social change in my country. Previously it was very difficult to visit relatives who were living far away. But now it has become easier to visit relatives frequently. People can celebrate festivals together. Thus inventions of automobile have developed social interactions. Finally invention of automobile has made economic revolutionary. It has made transportation of goods faster without damaging, spoiling of goods, which result in growth of businesses, industries. Thus lead in to overall economic revolutionary of my country. In conclusion discovery of automobile has made tremendous changes in my country. It has made traveling easier, faster and efficient. It has increased the mobility of people. It has made other technological development in overall country easier. So I think discovery of automobile has been most beneficial for people of my country.
  7. excellent Tips Thanks a lot Rachana
  8. Do you agree or disagree with following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answers. Some people think that zoo has no useful purpose because zoo is an unsuitable environment for wild animals, and should therefore be abolished. While some people think that having zoo is worth. I support the latter opinion because it has both scientific and nonscientific reasons. The scientific reasons are you can study animals closely and properly; you can breed and take care of animals properly, especially of those animal species which are becoming extinct. The non scientific reason is one can see different animals from different parts of the world at one place. Zoo is beneficial because in the zoo people can see actual animals. For kids visiting zoo is always fun. Parents can show their children real animals that they have learned and seen in the books and is a great way for children to learn about animals, their behavior and habits. Thus zoo has educational purpose. People can see different animals from different part of the world at one place. For example Kangaroo is mainly an animal of Australia but it’s not possible for all the people of the other countries to visit Australia just to see Kangaroo. For them Zoo is the best way to see this animal. Secondly nowadays many animal species are becoming extinct due to mass destruction of forests. In this case one can take proper care of these endangered species by providing them natural environment, food and medication. Moreover in the zoo it is possible to save these endangered species by breeding. In conclusion, zoo has many useful purposes such as educational purpose, they help to protect endangered animal species, and they teach us how wild animals behave. So I think having zoos are beneficial.
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    Hi please rate it

    hey thanks a lot for rating my essay and I will really try to improve my mistakes
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    Hi please rate it

    Some high schools require all students to wear uniform while some high schools allow students what to wear to school because many students hated to wear same dress throughout the week and they don’t get chance to wear fashionable dresses in the school. There are advantages and disadvantages in both school policies but if choice is given to me to choose one of theses polices then I would prefer the formal one because wearing school uniform teaches students discipline, equality, and concentration. I think having school uniform is a good policy because uniform mainly represents equality. As each student has to wear school uniform, one can not figure it out like whether the opposite one is poor or rich and thus one can make friends easily without knowing economic background. That results in kids social standing would be based more on individual character and less their economic status. Second thing research has shown that students who allowed what to wear in the school have less progress in studies than the students who require wearing uniform for school. Because if student allowed wearing cloths whatever they want for school then they have more concentration on fashion, designer and vulgar clothing and less concentration on studies. But students who require wearing uniform don’t have these points to think and it results in more concentration on studies. And the last but not least point of wearing uniform is each uniform represents each school. School uniform makes it easy for people to recognize that in which school one is studying. Uniform also make easier for teacher to recognize their students particularly during school picnics, exhibitions and so on. So based on all above points I think it is good to have school uniform for students.
  11. Thanks a lot for your suggestions, I will try to improve my essay.
  12. Some people think that it is better for children to grow up in countryside because countryside is more secure for children, while some people think that it is better for children to grow up in big city. These both aspects have advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion it is far better for children to grow up in big city because it offers more choices in education, facilities and fun activities. Most of us agree that education is crucial part of our life. There are plenty of choices for school in the big city. Parent has many options to choose school for their children. On the contrary, countryside has only one neighborhood school. So parent doesn’t have any options though the school may not be good for education. Second point is big city has many facilities in the sense of transportation, physical activities, entertainment. Big city has many means of transportation like bus, taxi, cars, and bicycles. So it is always easier to go from one place to the other place in the city. Other thing is city offers many extracurricular activities in arts, music, dance, sports, and hobby clubs. So children can do many other activities besides study. The last point is technologically big cities are more developed than villages. They have good services at hospitals. Hospitals are also equipped with modern technology. The phone and internet services are better in cities than in villages. So children can get used to new technology easily. Big city has many entertainment centers for children as movie theaters, playing parks, zoo, museums, restaurants and so on. On the basis of above points I think it is better to grow up children in the big city because children are more benefited in the big cities and it is also better for their future.
  13. Topic:-In some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by giving specific reasons. In some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still students and on the other hand in some countries teenagers don't have jobs while they are still students. These both ideas have advantages and disadvantages. But I think having jobs while studying is a good idea because it gives confidence, independence and experience to the student. While studying job doing is a good idea because it mainly gives confidence to the student that they can earn, they can do somthing to support themselves and to their family. They have ability to handle any job. By doing job one can get confidence that he has a ability to get better job position than the current one. Other thing is as one is earning, economically he is independent. He can pay his tuition fees and study by himself. He don't have to rely on his parents for tuition fee or for his expenses. It gives satisfaction that he is independent economically. Since students do jobs and study both at a time they learn how to manage their time, how to handle customers. While doing job many people learn earning money is not easy and realise importance of saving money. Last point is having job while studying gives lots of experiences to the person. And from those experiences one can get a chance to learn many new things and to develop his personality. Beside that having job experience is always helpful for future. It always easier to get job if you have any previous job experience. On the basis of above points i think it is a good idea to have job while studying.
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