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TOEFL iBT Raw Score: 5.0 (out of 5.0) IELTS Score: 7.5 bands (out of 9.0) This is a very good response. The essay effectively and adequately addresses the topic. It’s well organized and well developed using clear examples and details to support the ideas. The essay displays coherence and cohesion, with a good progression and connection of ideas. The essay displays a consistent facility in language use, employing a wide range of syntactic variety and good word choice, though it has minor occasional errors that does not interfere with the meaning.

Overall poor response. TOEFL iBT raw Score: 2.5 out of 5.0 The essay does not address the task accurately and has limited development. Connection of ideas/arguments are occasionally obscured, and there is also an inconsistency in sentence formation and word choice. Conclusive paragraph is too short, and does not address the question in the prompt. (question is to choose a proffered way of learning: learning through experience, v. learning though books; the internet WAS NOT an option).

Introductory paragraph is too short. Even though it addresses the task fairly well, it lacks elaboration of the idea. Development of the topic is fairly limited. Ideas were not connected properly and adequately. The language usage is not to-the-point and accurate, and limited range of lexical and structural resources utilized. Conclusive paragraph is missing. Poor response overall. TOEFL iBT Raw Score 2.0 out of 5.0. (IELTS score: 5.0 bands)

TOEFL iBT: 5.0 (out of 5.0) IELTS: 7.5 or 8.0 bands (out of 9 bands)

Score 2.5 out of 5. In the introductory paragraph, the candidate did not clearly mention which source is more important to them. The reasoning was insufficient to support the candidates initial standing in the matter and the development of the topic was limited. Ideas were not connected adequately and overall organization is missing. With only 250 words, recommended length of 300 words not satisfied. The essay also shows accurate but limited range of lexical and structural range. Conclusive paragraph is not addressing the topic appropriately. The topic asks to pick knowledge from experience or from books, but the candidateÂ’s preference was irrelevant to the topic. Good luck,