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GRE Issue AWA (Please provide feedbacks/rating - Thank you)
sabbu05 replied to Chester Marsh's topic in GRE AWA
I like the essay overall. However, it would have been better if you would have explained the idea in the last paragraph a bit more. Possibly, instead of the third para, you could have pitched in this idea and then ended up summarising all your thoughts in the last paragraph.