Re: Is this sentence proper? If not, how can I rewrite it?
Originally Posted by CEOSandeep
Beyond the communal setting of The University of Tulsa's campus, I'm interested in the values I gain from an education from this university.
Thanks so much guys!
It's okay; sounds very generic--your statement could apply to literally any university. Furthermore, you don't say what those values are--they could be values that encourage success over ethics or vice versa.
At least change the verb tense: 'I'm interested in the values I will gain'