CEOSandeep Posted November 8, 2015 Share Posted November 8, 2015 Beyond the communal setting of The University of Tulsa's campus, I'm interested in the values I gain from an education from this university. Thanks so much guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Erin Posted November 12, 2015 Share Posted November 12, 2015 Beyond the communal setting of The University of Tulsa's campus, I'm interested in the values I gain from an education from this university. Thanks so much guys!It's okay; sounds very generic--your statement could apply to literally any university. Furthermore, you don't say what those values are--they could be values that encourage success over ethics or vice versa. At least change the verb tense: 'I'm interested in the values I will gain' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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