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Is this sentence proper? If not, how can I rewrite it?


CEOSandeep

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Beyond the communal setting of The University of Tulsa's campus, I'm interested in the values I gain from an education from this university.

 

 

​Thanks so much guys!

It's okay; sounds very generic--your statement could apply to literally any university. Furthermore, you don't say what those values are--they could be values that encourage success over ethics or vice versa.

 

At least change the verb tense: 'I'm interested in the values I will gain'

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