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    Re: Please evaluate my essay

    "Everyone living in this earth has a responsibility to protect our natural world." - There is only one planet Earth, so it doesn't make sense to say "this earth". Maybe you could say: Everyone living...
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    Re: Please evaluate my essay

    Hello. I think your essay is well organised and your arguments are good. There a few problems with grammar and phrasal constructions that I'll try to point out. That last paragraph (before the...
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    Please comment on my essay, thanks a lot!

    Question: Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.
    Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which
    of these situations do you think...
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