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    Re: correct my essay

    The first problem is that there are no in-text references.
    Second, do not use an online essay as a source.
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  2. Re: Please have a look at my essay task 2 please

    Hello,
    Overall, this is a great essay. You answer the question and you know how an essay should look. For a better score, the introduction and conclusion have some obvious mistakes in content. My...
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    Re: PLEASE CHECK MY ACADEMIC TASK 2 ESSAY

    This looks like a 5.5. You know what an essay should look like, but your grammar and vocabulary are letting you down. You just need a little more time in a class to iron out some of these problems....
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    Re: IELTS correction is needed

    Hello,
    The introduction is a 7.0. Good phrases and few simple grammar mistakes. Very nice.
    The rest should get you a 6.0 (so the whole essay looks like a 6.0). The structure and task achievement...
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    Re: PLEASE CHECK MY IELTS ESSAY

    Hi,
    This looks like a 6.5 to a low 7.0 or higher in India and Pakistan:)
    The grammar has some simple mistakes with grammar (articles, gerunds, subject-verb agreement, although + however,...) and...
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    Re: Can you give feedback for my writing IELTS?

    The introduction looks Ok, but you focus on mobile phones too much.
    The next paragraph is poor. You repeat the word 'increase' too much. Use a range of vocabulary. You also give no numbers.
    The...
  7. Re: SOCIAL NETWORKS (FACEBOOK) - IELTS writing task II. Please some feedbacks....

    The introduction looks good and would get you an 8.0!
    The 'against' paragraph is not so good. It looks more like a 6.0 to 6.5. Thee are some basic grammar problems (are tend to, the rest of...
  8. Re: Please check and mark my ielts writing task 2 (Urgent)

    This should get you a 6.0. Please let me know if you got higher or lower. The structure is very good and the question is answered quite well. The grammar and vocabulary are the main problems here.
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    I am guess ing that you got a 6.5 for your...

    I am guess ing that you got a 6.5 for your writing? (Please tell me if I am wrong.)
    the problems are:
    "My opinion obeys three reasons." Is a bad translation from your language. "The reasons for and...
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    So..this looks like a strong 6.0. The vocabulary...

    A recent announcement has been made on the part of the related authorities that starting the upcoming academic year, the GPA of the high-school students would be a decisive factor for them to make a...
  11. Thread: task 2 essays

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    I think you are asking how to know what kind of...

    I think you are asking how to know what kind of essay you need to write (?).
    Anyway, if you are, the key is to look for 'task words'. If you know these words, you will know the type of essay you...
  12. This should get you 5.5. Everything looks ok,...

    This should get you 5.5. Everything looks ok, except for the grammar. For example:

    "It is commonly believed that how people wear clothes has a strong bond with the amount of their credibility,...
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    The introduction looks good. The first two...

    The introduction looks good.
    The first two sentences of the first body paragraph are poor. They say nothing. Look up 'topic sentences' on the Internet for more information.
    The next paragraph is...
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    Hi, This looks like a mix of scores!

    Hi,
    This looks like a mix of scores!
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    Hi, Yes, the grammatical errors are the biggest...

    Hi,
    Yes, the grammatical errors are the biggest problem. You do a good job addressing the task and the vocabulary is fine. However, "the mistakes are hard to get past", means that because the...
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