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  1. Wow! Personally, this is a potentail 6 essay. I...

    Wow! Personally, this is a potentail 6 essay. I think it also demonstrates that big words and fancy sentences do not always add up to good, readable essays; simple vocabulary and sentences could as...
  2. Despite some scattering grammatical mistakes and...

    Despite some scattering grammatical mistakes and some slightly awkward sentences (which should not severely affect your score), this is a wonderful essay, NewWave80's. Cogent arguments, nice...
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    chemically active: we need an adverb (chemically)...

    chemically active: we need an adverb (chemically) to modify the adjective (active). Chemical, by the way, is an adjective.
  4. I very much liked the reasons you brought to bear...

    I very much liked the reasons you brought to bear your arguments, ceste! Especially, the second one, where you discussed how face-to-face communication worked with your teacher.

    You seem to be...
  5. wg

    Hi NewWave80's, if this is your first attempt to write a TWE essay, it's quite impressive! But there is some room for improvement. Some suggestions I am about to offer may help you to re-write the...
  6. Thanks, Fresheart. :)

    Thanks, Fresheart. :)
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    This seems to be a potential draft; I'd encourage...

    This seems to be a potential draft; I'd encourage you to re-write it. Take your time to revise and edit. By doing so, you will learn to detect your own mistakes, ones that you knew but forgot while...
  8. Erin, thanks for your comment and words of...

    Erin, thanks for your comment and words of encouragement. I will surely keep practicing. :)
  9. Azi, to me, this topic is quite challenging--but...

    Azi, to me, this topic is quite challenging--but you've done a good job, in my opinion. However, your essay would benefit from editing, with an emphasis on grammar and mechanics. Some topics you may...
  10. Thanks, hfk, for your response. :)

    Thanks, hfk, for your response. :)
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    hfk, generally, your writing outshines that of...

    hfk, generally, your writing outshines that of most test takers, mine included. However, the essay (the supporting paragraphs, specifically) does not seem to be directed to the given topic. This...
  12. A nice essay which deserves a score of 5.5,...

    A nice essay which deserves a score of 5.5, Fresheart.
  13. Thanks, Jean and shark, for your readings--I very...

    Thanks, Jean and shark, for your readings--I very much ppreciate them. :)
  14. Thanks, Lukas, for your comment :)

    Thanks, Lukas, for your comment :)
  15. Please rate my essay--teenagers have jobs while they are still students?

    I do appreciate every input. :tup:

    Timed essay (30 mins)

    In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using...
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