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  1. While the author states that most of the American Universities occupied the largest portion in the list of top universities, it is totally obscure that whether the Universities rated are from wide range of courses and fields. The universities which are listed as Top Universities may belong to the same specific field, say, Computer Science. The author never mentioned about the variety of fields taken into account for the survey. Secondly, the author indicates that most of the world's laureates and scientific papers are established by Top American Universities. Here, a large number of critics can be raised with respect to this context. For example: What is the ratio of the total number of universities in America to the Universities that produce achievements? If the number of universities is much higher than the achievements produced, then it would result a negative impact in author's statement regarding American Higher Education. Moreover, it is not explicitly stated whether the papers and laureates produced belong to a specific field of interest or from wide variety of fields. Hence, it marks the statement of author that "Scientific output of American institutions is unparalleled". The author also suggests that college graduates earn more than the people with no degree on an average. However, this may not be true since the percent of college students who earn more than the others is not mentioned. Additionally, the author presents that there is growing anxiety in America regarding higher education. With a deep insight into this statement, it is clear that irrespective of top universities and number of achievements made, there is a increasing anxiety. This may not only due to increased student debts but also due to other factors such as the involvement of students, study environment, harassment in study place. Thus, irrespective of the academic achievements made by the Universities and high pay of college graduates, the author believes that a inner state turmoil is prevailing in America regarding higher studies due to high debts and low returns. But this many not be true since there are many plausible fallacies and the author doesn't provide any cognitive flow of ideas.
  2. Hi, I am a new member, making my first post. I would be delighted if some of the people here would help me out with my essay I have written on the analyzing an issue. Please tell me how much it would get out of 6 and any tips to make it better. Thanks in advance! Question: "A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum till they enter college." Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position. Essay: One of the most important concerns of a nation is the education of its children. Many countries follow different policies in this regard, and they all have their pros and cons. The suggested proposal in the question is certainly an interesting one, because it is effecient and promotes equality but also overlooks some pitfalls, and hence may not fulfill its intended purpose. This policy will bring down the cost of education, because the scale of production of books etc.will increase. The nation can also boast of the uniformity of the standard of education that it has. By implementing this program, the nation can claim that a child in any nook and cranny of the country is learning the same things as the rest of the country. However, this proposal has some holes.Firstly, it is not the curriculum but how it is taught that determines how well a child learns a topic. Two children having the same textbook but different teachers can have a world of difference in their level of understanding. Secondly, the proposal fails to account for the regional aspects of the nation in the education of children. A great example of this is languages. It is certainly necessary to learn the national language, but the children should also be able to learn the laguage in the particular part of the nation that he/she resides in. Knowledge of this is going to be of greater practical value to the student. Thirdly, it is important to let children experiment and try out different things while in their youth so as to be able to find out their strangths and weaknesses. A student who wants to pursue History, for example, can only do as much as his curiculum allows him to. Thus,it is important to make sure that students are not churned out of schoold like robots out of facrories, but carefully nurture their individuality as well, which can be done by providing additional courses as extra options.
  3. It would be very kind if someone can grade my argument essay.Hope to see positive response. Thank you in advance. Argument prompt - "Despite its downtown location, the Rialto Movie Theater, a local institution for five decades, must make big changes or close its doors forever. It should follow the example of the new Apex Theater in the mall outside of town. When the Apex opened last year, it featured a video arcade, plush carpeting and seats, and a state-of-the-art sound system. Furthermore, in a recent survey, over 85 percent of respondents reported that the high price of newly released movies prevents them from going to the movies more than five times per year. Thus, if the Rialto intends to hold on to its share of a decreasing pool of moviegoers, it must offer the same features as Apex." Essay- The mentioned business plan of the manager of Rialto Movie Theatre concludes that their Movie theatre should make changes in the business plan to prevent it from closing forever. To justify his conclusion, author provides few evidences such as; a recent survey indicating negative response about the theatre. As these evidences are based on certain assumptions which are not very sound, I do not think that the author’s conclusion is well-proved. Firstly, the author mentions about the recent survey of Apex Theatre which is having good facilities. Author here assumes that the people are satisfied completely only by the facilities provided by Apex Theatre. There may be a possibility that this happened due to considerably better location of the Apex Theatre or because of other reasons such as transportation facilities to outsiders and more interested people who are living in that same area where Apex is located. Furthermore, author indicates about the recent survey which implies 80 % of people’s negative response about the high price of new movies. Author here clearly assumed that the prize of ticket will not matter for people if the Theatre authority improves its service. He also assumes that high prizes of movie tickets are just because of the theatre authorities. There might be a case that people will not go to movies even after improving service and also there might be a possibility that these high rates are just because of high taxes by the government . Lastly, author also believes in extrapolation as it directly compares the strategies of Rialto Movie Theatre with the Apex Theatre without considering number of other factors in which they differ. It is not always true that, what works on one place will surely work on another place too. The author could have provided certain logical evidences to bolster the argument such as, information about both the places, people around them and facilities provided there so as to compare them. Also he could provide the number of respondents of survey, the actual reason behind the decreasing number of moviegoers and demands of respondents about the service and price.
  4. Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. We have always heard of the statement "Jack of all trades, king of none". If the universities were to make every student take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study, that is the story which would be repeated in every students life. The student would know alot of aspects and subjects outside his area of focus but he would lose the in depth knowledge of his own field of study. Great scientists have always demonstrated their in depth knowledge, which has led to great discoveries and inventions. Albert Eimestine knew almost all about physics which made him the master of it. His contributions to physics are solely based on his exquisite knowledge and expertise in the subject. If he were to start learning to dance along with physics the same results are certainly not expected. Moreover the questions of how do universities expect students to focus every field he works in also arises from such a decision. When it's anyhow hard for students to work on multiple projects from the same course, it becomes an arduous job if students are expected to work on courses they have never worked on before. The students after their studies are expected to work in a certain sector of the society. If the student have a diverse span of knowledge the sector of occupation becomes bewildering for the student. Anyhow to some extent the reason to a wide field of knowledge gives a route to a storage of untapped innovation for the students. Only when one tries to mix two different dishes together is when one creates a new one. In the same way when a student is exposed to a new culture outside his own he is able to look for new innovative ways to change one. Diversity is the very fundamental of our society. Just as every person is different from the other we would have students with a huge diverse field of knowledge if they were to learn outside their field. Finally the idea to spread the field of knowledge of a student is a very convoluted topic. To some extent it should be kept upto the discretion of the student and not the university to decide upon.
  5. [TABLE=width: 97%] [TR] [TD=class: copy-bold-light, width: 100%, align: center][/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=class: copy, align: center][TABLE=width: 100%] [TR] [TD=class: copy, align: left][TABLE=width: 98%] [TR] [TD=class: copy, colspan: 2][/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=class: copy, width: 85%]"Regulators and policymakers should respond to potential environmental threats even before the information is fully known or concrete."[/TD] [TD=class: copy, width: 15%, align: right][TABLE] [TR] [TD=align: center][TABLE=width: 10] [TR] [TD=bgcolor: #D2E4F8, align: center][TABLE=width: 23%] [TR] [TD]http://www.800score.com/images/time_left_block.gif[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=bgcolor: #D2E4F8, align: center][/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=bgcolor: #D2E4F8, align: center]http://www.800score.com/images/pause.gif[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [TR] [TD=class: copy]How would you rate the accuracy of the above statement? Support your position with reasons and examples.[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] [/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE] Regulators and policymakers should respond to potential environmental threat before the information is fully known since damaging of it is a irreversible process . Hence i agree with the above view. Over the years we have destroyed our environment in such a scale that its effect are visible now. Climatic changes ( global warming ), extinction of some species of animals are such effects. If an official have knowledge about some project which has slightest hindrance to the environment should scrutinize the project . If this is done in the initial days, then changes are easily accommodated otherwise reverse happens. For example , like in the case of Narmada dam project of Gujarat state in India , its potential threat was listed in initial phase . It has created danger for the people living around the dam area since water level would increase . So to avoid this , the government took necessary step for rehabilitation of such people to alternative place . Hence the risk was averted and project was implemented inspite of having threats which was resolved due to officials intervention. Secondly , let us look into example of nuclear power plants which are planned for installation at some places. If regulators do not respond at earliest time its consequences are enormous. Appropriate land need to be given , nuclear waste handling , calamity prevention measures and stringent laws if any rules are not followed ; all such things are to be taken into account before actual project information is available. Ignoring such things would led to tragedy such as Bhopal gas tragedy which shocked the world in 1984 where laws are mishandled and people suffered. Contrary to the above view , an action take at early stage might be flaw if proper information cannot be known and hence its interpretation could be debated . But in general environment related things should be taken in a cautious manner as already we have destroyed the nature to an extreme level. If proper steps would have taken at an earlier stage then Hiroshima and Nagasaki would have never faced the atomic explosion after effects . Till now its generation are facing problem ranging from health issues to physical deformation of body parts. At last , I would like to conclude that environment regulator should be extremely cautious for the coming generation since we have damaged our environment a lot . Hence we need to take steps to stop this destruction process and look into measures to replete our environment resources by having effect environment friendly policies.
  6. Hello everybody I am from Kazakhstan. I will take GRE exam soon. Please, somebody check my essay, I will appriceate any critics =))) As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position. This century became noticeable due to indenture of various technologies. Despite the fact that these innovations improved everyday life, there is common opinion that humans’ ability to think declined significantly owing to them. However, taking to account all the facts, I strongly believe that new technologies have opposite effects. The firs argument I want to mention to prove my point of view is that new technologies bring new standards to all life fields: education, work, business, family. Moreover , these innovations demand for developing atypical abilities. People have to learn to use such difficult gadjets as computer, microwave, mobile phone, i-pod, some medical equipment etc. And they need to memorize operations: switch off and on, rife buttons and principles of machine’s work. For example, ordinary manager today has to know a computer. Some functions, for instance, checkspelling, significantly simplify work tasks. But, if we look deeply, we observe that learning how to type, save and edit documents train manager’s brain. In addition, we should not forget, that nowadays all kind of job is usually very competitive and workers always have to improve themselves, learn new programs and new technology in order to get appropriate payment. Knowing new technology is advantage. On the other hand, some people do not work. I am talking about housewife, scholars and retired people. They do not have to compete with anyone and improve professional skills. It seems that they lose their ability to think for themsefls using calculators, GPS systems, computers thinking for them. But for understanding how to use these devices (and this devises all around – even check systems in a bus), people have to think. For example, as last researches highlighted, computer games has beneficial effect to developing their ability to problem solving and reaction. Moreover, even some kitchen equipments contain so many different programs to manage it, that some housewives more astute than ever in history. Nevertheless, approval than people’s ability to think deteriorated is rife, usually in post sovet union countries. I believe the main reason for this is older generation‘s nostalgic fillings about the past. Still, there are no scientific evidence of this statement. Conversely, British scientists discovered that children today are much intelligent that they could be before. Facts of birth indigo children are mentioned more common. Little baby surround with amount of information. And the source of it like a rule TV, mobile phones, computers. These connote that humans level of intellect became higher. In other words new technology is source for learning for the children. To sum up, new technology obviously changed the way individuals find solutions for their problems. No doubt that some technology can do life easier and sometimes “think” for people. But if we look at this claim from the different angle we can notice that new technology mostly demand think in the new way and lead us to better, more intelligent way of livein.
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