Score 2.5 out of 5.
In the introductory paragraph, the candidate did not clearly mention which source is more important to them.
The reasoning was insufficient to support the candidates initial standing in the matter and the development of the topic was limited. Ideas were not connected adequately and overall organization is missing.
With only 250 words, recommended length of 300 words not satisfied. The essay also shows accurate but limited range of lexical and structural range.
Conclusive paragraph is not addressing the topic appropriately. The topic asks to pick knowledge from experience or from books, but the candidates preference was irrelevant to the topic.