sadcat Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 Some people think that government should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. A government should spend money on basic needs to improve peoples' life. However, the development of computer technology is also necessary. In my opinion, a government should spend more money for the improvement of computer technology because indirectly it will be helpful to improve the basic needs of the people. Computer technology can improve the standard of education in a country. It can improve the growth of economy of a nation. It can improve the peoples' knowledge by exploring the world. A government should spend more money on computer technology because it is a great help for the improvement of educational standards in a country. Education is a basic need of a nation for the development of a country. In developed countries people use computers from preschools to high level degree classes. It is necessary for the students to use computer for learning because it is a very helpful tool to study. For example, a student can attend distance learning classes with the help of computer and internet. Another benefit of computer is that It makes the study quicker than traditional educational setup. For example, A person can have a whole library in a computer and he does not need to go to a library for hours to search a single book or a topic. On the other hand, if a government does not care for the development of computer technology in country then the students will not be able to study in efficient way and they would not compete internationally. Computer is very important for the good standard of education in a country. A government can make a country economically strong by spending on computer technology. As the world is becoming global village people can do overseas businesses with the help of computer. For example, a person can export and import things with out traveling from his own country or from other countries with the help of computer and internet. Businessmen can introduce with each other with the help of websites. They can share their experiences with the help of e-mails. When the people of a country will become strong economically they will be volunteer to spend their money for basic needs of the people of their country. But if they could not use the computer technology and do not know about the international trading, they will possibly be not strong enough to support poor people of their country. A country can be strong economically by spending on developing and buying computer technology. A government should spend money for the improvement of computer and internet because it will be helpful for the people to explore the world and gain knowledge. With the help of computer and internet people can have more knowledge about the world. For example, with the help of internet people can access to the newspapers of the other countries. They know about the cultures of other countries. They can have access to the recent research papers and journals of the developed countries' scientists. By gaining this knowledge a nation can make standards and developments locally to compete with the modern world. On the other hand if the people of a country do not have computer technology, they would not able to make their name in any field in this world. In conclusion, a government should spend more money for the improvement of computer technology because it helps to improve the education, economy and knowledge of a nation. Infect, it also improve the basic needs of the people of a country. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mandle Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 Generally, your responsed is at the level about 4.5 of 5. In second paragraph, you spent a little too many words on examples, while the two "examples" are not clear enough. Your response is the one which strictly fllowed the offical guide. Anyway, it's a good one.:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sadcat Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 Thank you so much!!! appreciate your help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ktm2008 Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 Your essay is very well-written, but I've noticed that there are a few grammatical errors here and there. You should clear that up. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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