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Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree. Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer. Each and every business needs employees. The success of a particular business depends on its employees. It is important for the management to verify that to which extent an employee could fulfill their target and to which extent they will be concerned towards their work. I disagree that businesses should hire employees for their entire lives for the reasons like lack of innovative thinking and the gradual decrease of the commitment towards work. Undoubtedly, businesses hiring employees for their entire lives has to face many problems. Many of the businesses try to follow the present trends. As the technology is improving day to day the employees who were hired for their entire lives cannot have much awareness towards these advancements. And so the management needs to have people who are much efficient in that particular advancement. Now a days we can see that there are many job offers for the fresh graduates in almost every fields. This example itself shows that the businesses are looking for innovativeness. Secondly, the employees who are hired for their entire lives will gradually have less commitment towards their work. These employees will not have the fear of loosing their job for their entire life. Consequently they will be careless towards the work. In my country, I have observed many government employees who are irregular in their work. As a result many of the pubic sectors are being privatized. There were many other disadvantages like the businesses have to spend lot of money for getting their employees trained for the new advancements and giving increments. In sum, I disagree that businesses should hire employees for their entire lives as for the reasons like lack of innovative thinking and the gradual decrease of the commitment towards work. I feel it is better to hire fresh graduates, as they are able to do miracles. Bruno,Ish...pls rate it....I am having exam on aug22nd.

Hi carmen..... All these comments i made may be wrong.....as i don't how far i am aware of the grammer.If i had corrected anything wrongly kindly forgive me...... Practice welll u can achieve ur target.U r on the way to success.... All the best...and by the way thanks a lot for correcting my essay. It seems u r the one rating my essays and i am the one rating ur essays isn't it..... Neelu....

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your answer. Children are more vulnerable to their surroundings. The environment in which the child grow will have great influence on them. The way the child behave and the way they react to the situation basically depends on their surroundings. In my opinion, it is better for the children to grow in a big city than in the country for the reasons like good education, advanced medical facilities and accurate view towards many general things. Undoubtedly, it is better for children to grow up in a city to have their education. It is unfortunate that, still many of the villages are lack of schools. This is the main reason why many of the people living in villages are illiterate. The schools in cities follow many advanced methods of teaching their children. As a result the children will be aware of the advanced technology. Secondly, the children who grow up in a big city will have excellent medical facilities. In villages there is a chance for the people to have many health problems because of their ignorance about various diseases and the causes. As children are less resistant to diseases they often fall sick and may even die. In cities, I observed many parents running towards the hospitals even for the silly health problems like cold and cough. Some of my relatives and their children who live in a big city often visit my village for vacation. They used to have many health problems. And we have to run to the near by towns. Finally, it is better for children to grow up in a big city to have accurate view towards many things. In cities we have advanced technology like videogames, toys, computers and televisions. These help the children to gain more knowledge. We have a wide diversity of people in cities, either it be in neighborhood or in school. So the children can learn their culture, their food habits and so forth. In sum, I believe that it is better for children to grow up in a big city than to grow up in the countryside. As children are trendsetters they should be aware of the advancements in each and every field.

As my exam date is approaching i became more reliable on this site. I missed u a lot TM....Yesterday i was really frustrated. Tried to open it many times..... Thanks Erin....

Hiiiii rifay, ur presentation has improved a lot.Essay and ur ideas are really good. When do u have ur toefl exam....All the best rifay ....Goahead... Neelu.

Hi venkat... congrats.Thts really a great score............

Hiiii, Ur essay would look better if u follow the format. 1+3+1, 1st para with introduction. The next three paragraphs with the main points with which u agree and The last para with conclusion. Don't write one or two lines under a paragraph.Better to write all those two or three lines as a single paragraph.Okkkk All the best carmen.....

Thanks carmen for ur reply........

It has been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Education plays an important role in one's life. We cannot deny the fact that still many people in our world are lack of having their basic education. It is unfortunate that people belonging to my community has to travel a long distance to have their high school education. Mainly for this reason i support the plan of building a high school in my community. A new high school in my community povides various benefits like employment , convenience and the basic education to our people. Undoubtedly, having a new high school provides employment to our people. As a high school needs teaching staff, non- teaching staff and some other people, there will be a chance for our people to get employed. So it would definitely a benefit to our people those who are unwilling to leave their native place on employmet purpose. Secondly, having a new high school in our community will be more beneficial to those people who are planning to shift thier families to other cities to get their children well educated. In my childhood, i used to travel a longdistance by bus to have my high school education. It will be convinient to have a high school in our community as there is no need for children to go long distance for their education. There will be no travelling charges. And it will be a relief to those parents who feel tense about their children from the very moment they leave the house and untill they reach the house safely. Finally, As to travel a long distance for education most of the parents of our community won't like to get their children educated. So having a high school in our community will help most of our children to get educated. In sum, I support the plan of building a high school in our community as it provides various benefits like employment, convineince and education. This plan will surely helps our people to move in a success path.

hi friends..... I am also having the exam on aug22nd.Good luck to all of us.And by the way this is my first toefl test.Feeling nervous.

Hiiiii, I need to advice u 1.Don't go straight into the topic.Better to have the introduction part a bit longer and intersting. 2.Presentation is not that much good. 3.Try to explain ur reasons well. As it is ur first essay i really appreciate u for ur performance.Go ahead.... All the best in advance.... Neelu.

hi rifay, Sorry to say this.I feel the essay mainly concentrates on whther to have few friends or many friends.But u concentrated mainly on how to spend the leaisure time. I just feel like that.May be i am wrong. Wht bruno, wht do u say?Is the topic is about spending leaisure time.Once think of it.And plsss send me reply.This is the first comment of mine.I joined this forum yesterday.

congrats ariharass .......good job...all the best for GRE