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hi!! I really need you to tell me if my essay is bad, good or if a need to improve it. if you can please rate it!! thank you really much for all your comments topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face to face communication is better than others types of communication, such as letters, emails, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Since the very beginning of the society, it has been important to communicate with each other. In the begining of the human raise, we do it eather by signs or face to face, because we did not have any other way to commuicate among others. Nowadays, we have a lot of ways of communication, such as the telephone, email, letters or face to face. In my opinion, face to face communication is not better than other types of communication such as letter, emails, or telephone calls. By writing a letter, no only will you express your feeling and thoughts better, but you will be able to say more things than in face to face communication. For example, a cople of months ago, I had a disagreement with my mother about my studies. I felt unable to have a face to face communication with her, so instead I wrote her a letter in which I could express my thoughts and feelings better than in a face to face communication. In the other hand, by using ways of communication such as emails and telephone calls we will save time. Sometimes, in this rush world, we do not have the time to have a face to face communication with other persons, therefore it is better to use emails or telephone calls as a way of communication than to in a face to face communicaton. However, there may be persons that think that face to face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letter, emails, or telephone calls. Because this type or communication tends to be quite impersonal, they prefer to talk to somebody face to face. In conlusion, communication such as letters, emails, and telephone calls are developments that we should use as a way of communication. By using this type of communication, not only will we save time but we will be able to say a lot of things more than in a face to face communication.

TOPIC Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or it is better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some people may prefer to spend their money after they receive it, and some others may prefer to save that money for some time in the future, such as an economic emergency or to buy something in specific, like a car or a trip. I belong to the latter category. In my opinion, it is better to save the money for some time in the future. First of all, I want to mention an example of my own. When I was a child, my father gave me money every weekend so I can spent it in whatever I may prefered, but in the minute a got it, I spent inmmediatly in the next hours or days. However, when I started to work, due to the hours and effort that I spended on earn it, I became more careful spending my money,. Therefore, I support the aspect that is better to save your money for some time in the future, and not to enjoy it inmmediatly. Secondly, by saving your money, not only can you prevent an economic emergency, but you can save it for buying something expensive in which one salary is not enough Sometimes we want to buy something really expensive, such as a car or a trip, but we do not have the enough money to buy it. In conclusion, I think that it is better to save your money for some time in the future. To tell you the truth, for me is very difficult to save my money, because I want to spend it in the minute I get it, but I really think that by doing this I can prevent an emergency or buy in the future something more expensive and valuable.

Topic 127 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels abd shorts stories) is more enjoyable than watching a movie. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. Some people prefer to watch a movie than to read a book, such as novels or shorts stories. I belong to the last cateogry. Reading a book gives you a lot of satisfactions rather than to watch a movie. By reading a book you can imagine even the characters or the complete escenary, in some books the author discribes the characters and the surrounding, but even thou the final real faces and surrounding depends on you. Also, reading can expand your vocabulary, spelling and grammar in all aspects. Primarly, by reading a book you will be a more creative person, because you have to imagine all that the author is describing. In my opinion es more interesting to create you own surrounding, based in the author description, than if it is already set up like in the movies. Furthermore, you can imagine that you are one of the characters of the story, even more if they have your same name. Secondly, reading fiction such as novels or short stories, can expand a lot your vocabulary. Even thou we maybe has allready a big vocabulary, its almost imposible to manage all the words. We can find in novels or in short stories words that we did not know and by looking up the meaning of them, we will rememember them easier. Also, we can learn a lot of grammar structure and spelling by reading all kind of books, such as novels or short stories. However, there maybe people that prefer to watch a movie, instead of reading a novel or a short story. Buy doing this you can save a lot of time, because is quicklier to watch a movie that to read a novel, and also is easier to watch something already set up than to imagine all the surrounding. Furthermore, you can go with an other person, and share the experiencie of watching a movie with your companion. In conclusion, I support the statement that reading fiction, such as novels or short stories is more enjoyable than watching a movie. In my opinion, imagining the characters and the surrounding is more funny that to watch a movie, and I think that it is important to expand as much you can your vocabulary, grammar and spelling.

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TOPIC: Some people belive that the Earth is being harmed (damage) by human activity. Others fell that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What os your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. ESSAY The Earth, wich is the only planet in where life can exist, is our home, therefore, we should take care of it, and we have to considerate that it is the only one that we will have. In my opinion we are harming the Earth by diferents human activities like are: exploting fauna and flora for industry propose and polluting water and air with all the quimical products that we use, among others. By spreeding quimicals to the air, for example when we use hair sprays or aerosols we are contributing to destroy the ozone layer, who protect us for the UV rays that can harmed our skin, producing us skin cancer among others illnesses related to the skin. Also the brake down of the ozone layer will cause us in a long future, extremly higher tempetures that we can not will be able to resist. Furthermore, the water that is necesary to live is being polluted as well. Many factories throw its quimical wastes through the ocean or to the sea. This way of pollution can cause the death of many fishes, whales, dolphins among other ocean animals. An other important aspect is the extintion of the flora and the fauna, by breaking the natural circle of nature we are harming our ecosistem. For example if we are fishing tuna and with it we fish dolphins, there will be a lot of sharks and they can harm us as well. An other example are the trees, wich provide us the oxigen necessary to breath, if we cut them all we will cause to the human king a lack of oxigen to survive. May be I am being a lit of bit exagerating thinks but if we do not do something about it, this can make be the futrure reality. However, some people can think that because of the human activity we are making the Earth a better place to live. Now we are builting houses, developing new and faster transportation and diferents ways of comunication like telvision, radio or Internet. With all this we are living better than in the past, but it is really worth the destruction of our natural resorses? Now a days are many people that can not live in a big city, for example Mexico city, because its air is polluted, and this can cause irritations on the eyes and dryness on the skin, so they have to moved to the country or at another clean area. In conclution, the human activity is more harmfull for Earth than it is making it a better place to live, we should worry about conservation of our natural resorses son we can continue living in armony with it.

The televison is one of the most important inventions in the last few years with it, we can be informed about what is happening in the rest of the world or more important in our very hometown. However, everything in excess is bad, if we saw television all day it will probably afect the comunication with our familiy or friends, but if we saw it a few hours a day it might do not affect at all. In my familiy, seeing television do not affect anything the comunication with them, in fact seen it makes the comunication stronger. A few months ago Televisa, a telvision producer, transmited a reality show quite entretening that makes the whole family join together to saw the show, and while it was transmited we where expresing our oppinion about it. That hours in which we where seeing the reality show was the most amezing hours of the week, because we where all together sharing our time with each other. A similar thing happen with my friends, we saw a television show the day before school and the next day we talk about it. Sometimes we only discuss about one show, like the funny things that happened if its a comedy show, or maybe we can critizace a realty show. I am not saying that we talk about the television show all the time but surely about an hour or more. In conlusion, a disagree about that the television has destroyed communication among friends and familiy. Maybe it has distroyed a culture communication because instead of talk about books or art movies we are talking about realty or comedy shows. In my opinion television can make the communication with friends and family stronger if they have the same interests and saw the same television shows.