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Hi all, I am going to give toefl on 21 of Aug. I can any one please comment on my essay. You are welcome with any kind of comments. Can u please tell me where i stand. #134: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I agree to the statement that children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Children observe and learn things quickly, this would improve their ability to analyse and make correct decisions. When they help with household tasks their confidence will build up which is important life. Firstly, children observe things and learn from them constantly. So, they should also help with household responsibilities. This would help them to get organized, which will be helpful in future. For example, When I was in school, I took care of the budget for groceries at home. I used to analyse what purchases are necessary and what are not, then I use to make decision based on the budget, I had with me. Which helps me even now, I can spend money accordingly and also save it. Secondly, when children help with the household functions and do things perfectly. It will boost their confidence. For example, when kids do entire job. Generally, they should be appreciated, by this gesture, they will be happy and they will build up confidence to do different things. They would also do well in their studies. Building up their confidence is important and will help them in future. In conclusion, based on the mentioned reasons. I support that children should take part in helping household tasks. Which would build their confidence, oraganisational skills and analatical abilities. It would also be helpful in future life.

Hi all, i followed some rules which others adviced me. i will be giving toefl exam shortly. can anyone please correct this essay. #157: In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice. Certainaly, in future students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology or at traditional schools. I would prefer to attend traditional school instead of studying at home by using technology such as computer or television. The reasons are I can meet new friends, there will be healthy competition among the students, one can gain more information then what's in the subject. Firstly, by attending traditional school, I can make friends with the classmates with whom I can study in group. They can even help me with my doubts and homework. If I miss any class they can help me with notes and explaining the subject. For example, my friend Jeny and I study together and we clear each others doubts and help each other in the subject we are not strong. We also share our note in case we miss the class. Secondly, There will be healthy competition among the students in order to get better grades. For example, in order to get better grades. We all classmates study hard. At the same time, we also help each other with subject matter such as discussing about the subject and clearing queries of other classmates. Thirdly, we can get more information then what is in the subject. The lectures in the school are knowledgeable and they will have more knowledge about the subject because they will be teaching the same subject from many years. There will be chance to hear other students queries and when teacher answers them even we can get more information about the subject. In conclusion, I would prefer attending school rather than studying at home using computer or television. The reasons are making friends and studying harder at traditional school. I can have the opportunity to get cleared my doubts and clear other student’s queries.

Hi, Can anyone please correct my essay? is typing mistakes considered as mistakes? For example typing " becuase" as "becuase". Topic 151 What is the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important? Use reasons and specific details to explain your answer. The most important animal in India is cow. Indians consider cow to be scared, it has special place in Hindu mythology. Cows play an important role in agriculture, female gives milk which is used for many purposes. Its whole body can be utilised for use. Firstly, cows contribute towards development of agriculture. The male cow is know as bull, it is used for plowing the agricultural field for framing crops such as rice, wheat other vegetables and so on. The female cow is used for milk farming. The milk can be used for ghee, curd, butter and condensed milk and so forth. Secondly, cow is useful for cobbler and mankind generally. Its whole is used. Its skin can used for belt, shoes, lather jackets,purses and its horns for hair combs so on. Even the excretion of a cow is used as fertilizers for plants and as gas for cooking. Last but not least, in India cow was domestic animal. Every household used to have cow in their backyard. The people used to worship cow and it has significance in Indian culture. In conclusion, I can realise the importance of cow in our country, based on the reasons that cow is used for agriculture, milk farming and as fertilizer. Therefore, cow stands the most important animal in India.

Hi, can anyone please correct my essay. i will be giving my toefl very soon and i want to get good score in essay. #042: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Mostly, people think aptitude is important skill a person should learn. They say " aptitude cannot be built in one day or over night". But I believe in adoptability cannot be built in overnight and I think adoptablility is the most important skill, one should learn because the world is changes from one day to another. Firstly, rapid changes are taking place in the world and in our daily lives. A person should be ready to face the new challenges each day. For example, in computer profession, one should be upto date with all the software and he/she should also learn different computer languages in which the project is done. Even the life style as become busy, in most of the house's both the parents are working. For example, both the parents leave to their respective offices and children will leave to their schools early in the morning. Generally, there will be no time to prepare food in traiditional way. At this point, they prefer TV dinners and ready made food in week days. Secondly, adopting to different environment and living helps to maintain good human relations. For example, changing to different country or town for job, getting along with new community, people in different country. It would also help when we get married to the person with different life style. In conclusion, I think that adoptability will be advantageous for new situation in life. Accpetng changes and changing would help to achive success. Therefore, One can be successful by being adoptable to new situation. Thanks :)

hi everyone, can u please correct my essay ? i am planning to write toefl very soon and i want get atleast 5.0 score. #115: Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer — planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice. Some people prefer to planning activities for their free time very carefully and some don't. There are many advantages on both the sides. Planning will give more time to accomplish all the activities and there will be no confusion in what to do next. Not making plans for the free time allows to relax and have fun to do things without any time schedule. Planning is advantageous to those who like to travel to many places, meet many people or try many new things. For example, people have to plan ahead before going to other country. They have to plan about their expenditure, places to visit, and what type of clothes they have to take. By planning, people can avoid confusion to do activities. For example, if I go to any new place without plan. I will not know what to do and which place to visit. Without planning I will not know the important places to visit and my trip will be waste. On the other hand, unplanned free time is fun and relaxing. Not planning for free time gives freedom from scheduling, following, rushing to accomplish the activities and so on. For example, If free time is unplanned, we can watch TV, sleep and eat. If there is any concert going on in the city, we can go and watch, at our own time and enjoy. Its also fun to just plan at the movement and go for a movie or park. Therefore, planning or not planning for free time has their own advantageous and it depends on type of activity and the length of free time. I prefer to plane my free time to meet many people and make trips to new places.

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hi, please comment on my essay. # 31 Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion. Some people spend their entire lives in one place. They don't like to adopt themselves to new place. In my opinion, by moving to many new places looking for a better job, house, community or even climate, one would gain experinece to lead life in any stiuation and adopting to new enviroment. Both as its own advantages and disadvantages. Firstly, moving to new place, one will know about many things like about people, culture and life style and so on. New place can provide good opportunities like job, good schooling for children. For exmaple, In USA and Canada minimum education for children is provided by goveronment by providing schools. In Canada health insurance is taken care by goveronment, one need not pay for the visit to the doctor. Secondly, one will know where they stand in international standards like in education or job. For example, masters in commerces is considered as highest degree in my home town. But the same degree is regarded as under graduate level, when it is compared to USA degree. So, by moving place to place I will know, what is my qualification and knowledge. It will not be like "frog in a well". There fore, based on the above reasons, I strongly prefer, moving from place to place is a great experience over staying at one place. People can learn many things from their lives and also adopt to any stiuation.

Hi, everyone can u please correct my essay? I will taking my toefl exam soon enough. If u have any tips to improve my essay u are welcome. I have other question do they consider typing errors, as errors? #114: Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position. Most people think that the family plays an important role in influencing the young adults. But in my opinion, even though surroundings influence young adults, friends are the most important influence on them because young people share their ideas and spend most of their time with their friends. Firstly, as an adult child, they spend with friends studying in school, playing and discussing their ideas. They hardly spend time at home because of their home-works, projects, sports and so on. For example, if I have a question about the lust or infatuation on other person. I would speak to my friend about it. Certainly, I would not feel comfortable speaking to my parents about lust or infatuation. So, it is also important to choose good friends. Secondly, parents give their own share of influence and teachings like what is good, bad and certain rules to follow in life. But it depends on the young adult to follow it or not. For example, in a family, there are two childern. one might grow as a good person and other as a bad person on continues influence of their parents. So, influence of friend also plays an important role. In conclusion, surroundings, family and friends influence young people. But friends play major role influencing young people. Therefore, one should be intelligent enough to decide which friend is good and which friend is bad because choosing a good friend is very important.