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  1. Hi There Be available tomorrow on Your yahoo messenger from 12:00 to 4:00 according to Eastern time. I will email you and we can practice together. If you cant make it, Good Luck for your exam Pramesh
  2. Hi All, I am taking TOEFL iBT on June 21st 2008. In order to reach goal of 26 in speaking, I am looking for a speaking partner according to Eastern time, Since I am in Georgia. Pramesh Patel
  3. Hi Kathy you did nice work. your essay range between 3.0 to 3.5. you have good hold of grammer and you have enough view points to explain your side. But you need to write a bit advance. I mean try and use some advance level vocabulary. other people correct me if I am wrong. Prame
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    Please Grade My Essay

    I agree with Awhig Ø I would score your essay 2.5 Ø Expand you essay with supportive examples Don’t post your essay without proof reading (read it twice after you finish writing) Punctuation mistake Too many unnecessary words (Marked with red) No Formatting Ø Leave five spaces before you start new paragraph Ø Heat enter twice after you finish your paragraph You essay with suggestions :- According to me, having a restaurant in my neighborhood has few advantages over many disadvantages. Not necessary è also, such as If I have a restaurant beside my house, it will be really easy for me to go and pick up the food any time of the day. As it is a restaurant, I will have lots of choice on the menu. Even having a good restaurant in neighborhood will increase the market price of my house. Besides all this, a residential area has to be quiet and peaceful and a restaurant means lots of vehicles and people around. So, naturally it will make the place crowdie and nosy. Also from the view point of security it’s not good to have a restaurant beside your house. As, all the type of people will be coming there. Along with all this, every time their will be smell of food in the surrounding of the restaurant. Food smell is tempting when you are hungry but, one cannot bare it for the Complete day. Also in restaurants lot of oil is used for frying purpose, this will pollute the air around in this area. So, considering all the above advantages and disadvantages I will never like to have a restaurant in my neighborhood.
  5. Thisa essay is good. As I mentioned earlier, you compared negative side and positive side, and state your point. I feel in this essay, you didnot provide strong supportive examples. Another thing, I would like to tell you is, when we talk generally, in English we dont need to mention he/she everytime. When I took TOEFL PBT in 2000, I read this clause in structure section. Whenever you are not sure of gender you dont need to mention he/she. it is understood when you mention he. well good luck Prame
  6. Hi TOEFLPhobia you need to elaborate your conclusion. All you mentioned is positive side of machines. Mention negative side of machine. compare positive side and negative side, outweigh your side whether positive or negative, and mention why you insist that side. you could have mentioned following as in your conclusion. Machines can produce identical things of large quantity with best quality precisely. However, machines has rendered people’s lives less active and hence resulted into health consequences. Because I am aware of consequences of inactive life and I am able to take care of it, due to capabilities of machines I would like to do things with the use of machines. thats what I feel. Correct me if i am wrong. good luck Prame
  7. Prame

    please rate my essay

    You need to format your essay. After reading you essay, I realized you were just working on topics and how many ideas you have on that topic in your mind. Please Elaborate your essay, try and write it little longer. good luck Prame
  8. Hi Rupesh I got directions in my other postings. follow http://www.freizeit.co.in/toefl-b183.0/ this site and download books you need. start with the book of ETS "Official study guide for TOEFL iBT". atleast write one independent and integrated task. and practise speaking on different topics. If you have computer, you have sound recorder in accessories. record your speech and practise on it. let me know if I can guide any further. Good Luck Prame
  9. Thanks Ashwig for directing me in direction. Prame
  10. Hi Pavishi Thank you very much for taking time out and sending me the site for the online books thanks so much once again may god bless you and fulfill all your dreams wish you good luck for your exams Prame
  11. Hi All Please suggest me which online site I should use for free downloading TOEFL books for writing. I really appreciate assistance in this matter Wish you all good luck Prame
  12. Hi All I am new to this form and I am taking TOEFL iBT this August. I took TOEFL in February and I scored 20 in speaking and I have to improve that to 26. So I need your suggestion about improving my speaking skills. Please suggest me which online site I should use for free downloading TOEFL books for writing. I really appreciate assistance in this matter Wish you all good luck Prame
  13. Hi All I am new to this form and I am taking TOEFL iBT this August. I am weak at writing section. I took TOEFL in February and I scored 20 in writing and I have to improve that to 24. So I need your suggestion about improving my writing skills. Please suggest me which online site I should use for free downloading TOEFL books for writing. I really appreciate assistance in this matter Wish you all good luck Prame
  14. Thanxs Raza Thanxs for your help and time could you pleasse share any links or online GRE stuff if you are using any? appreciate it and best of luck to u:tup: for your future Prame
  15. Hi All GRE Takers I am new to this forum and I will be taking GRE in the next month please help me in quantitative section I am preparing from Barrons please share if you are using other sites and the information you all have thanxs and best of luck to u all Prame
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