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  1. shahsm0ja

    TOEFL Essay

    thank you. I really proud of this replay
  2. I posted a many topics and no one would like to comeet my Essay moreover I asked many of you to do so, But no any help. Really it is big shame and I am woundering of this action is this the policy of Testmagic Forums.While I trust all of you really it is big shame on all of you.Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks.[:(!]
  3. the subject as below: Do you agree or disagree with the following statment? It is always better to worke slowly and carefully than to worke quckly. use specific reasons and examples to supoport your opinion. I agree to worke slowly and carefully than worke quicklly. Working slowly and carefully gave me chance to complet my worke in good and carefull manar also, My company advice me to do that while working there because it minimaieze injures and complete jobs in right conditions. But some time we need to increase the speed level of the jobs by working alitil pit quickly because we would like to turn in the mition as soon as possible so, Working quickly is requierd but not to ignore the safety procedures that means workinking carefully. Finally working should be finished as soon as any one can but in safe, Good condition and in the pruoper way that due to the person ability to avoied any stress which cuse bad feeling to the person or to the right condition of the shape of the job. Alos, Remember don't ignore the safety procedure any time or any where.:cool:[clap][bomb]:o
  4. hi Erin please try to Correct tihis Essay and grade it of 6.thanks because I will have TOEFL test on May ,31 the Suject as below: when some people take vacation,they like to return to the same place over and over .Other prefer to try new places for vactions.Which do you prefer ? use specific reasons and details to suport your answer. I prefer to take a vacation in some difrent place to try another place is more intersting than visting the old place. As knowen I will have more acknolege , Friends , Places...etc.more than the old place. Visting the old place once more is more boring to me so that I will try to to have another distenation to have more enjoements. As I do with my vecation.I visited Jorden last year but in this year I have plan to Visit Turky due to I made a good friendship with some Jordens and have some good information witrh some peopole there I would do the same in Turky. But some people prefer to visit the old place over and over it is up to them. Finaly the vacation is the best time fo every one to renew his activity and refresh his mind of the work and long rotain. It is nice to spend it in any place which he is prefered to do so and which way he is like to come back to his work in or after his vacation in lively condition. thanks and Iam sorry if I had any mistaik. and make sure I would like to visit America after I pass this test.
  5. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hi Erin please try to Correct tihis Essay and grade it of 6.thanks because I will have TOEFL test on May ,31 the Suject as below: when some people take vacation,they like to return to the same place over and over .Other prefer to try new places for vactions.Which do you prefer ? use specific reasons and details to suport your answer. I prefer to take a vacation in some difrent place to try another place is more intersting than visting the old place. As knowen I will have more acknolege , Friends , Places...etc.more than the old place. Visting the old place once more is more boring to me so that I will try to to have another distenation to have more enjoements. As I do with my vecation.I visited Jorden last year but in this year I have plan to Visit Turky due to I made a good friendship with some Jordens and have some good information witrh some peopole there I would do the same in Turky. But some people prefer to visit the old place over and over it is up to them. Finaly the vacation is the best time fo every one to renew his activity and refresh his mind of the work and long rotain. It is nice to spend it in any place which he is prefered to do so and which way he is like to come back to his work in or after his vacation in lively condition. thanks and Iam sorry if I had any mistaik. and make sure I would like to visit America after I pass this test.
  6. shahsm0ja

    TOEFL Essay

    hi Erin please try to Correct tihis Essay and grade it of 6.thanks because I will have TOEFL test on May ,31 the Suject as below: when some people take vacation,they like to return to the same place over and over .Other prefer to try new places for vactions.Which do you prefer ? use specific reasons and details to suport your answer. I prefer to take a vacation in some difrent place to try another place is more intersting than visting the old place. As knowen I will have more acknolege , Friends , Places...etc.more than the old place. Visting the old place once more is more boring to me so that I will try to to have another distenation to have more enjoements. As I do with my vecation.I visited Jorden last year but in this year I have plan to Visit Turky due to I made a good friendship with some Jordens and have some good information witrh some peopole there I would do the same in Turky. But some people prefer to visit the old place over and over it is up to them. Finaly the vacation is the best time fo every one to renew his activity and refresh his mind of the work and long rotain. It is nice to spend it in any place which he is prefered to do so and which way he is like to come back to his work in or after his vacation in lively condition. thanks and Iam sorry if I had any mistaik. and make sure I would like to visit America after I pass this test.[clap][heartbeat][^]
  7. What A are you saing. Please dont say orders otherwise you will be complained to Erin and you knew Erin. Scond Time dont say orders any more please.Thank you. Posted - 2004 Apr 13 : 01:56:17 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It is 'airing'. Because "A computriezed map of the freeways using information gathered... " tells that the map is doing this at the moment (continuouly), only airing makes sense for the clause that follows, other don't. ... and you should not cross post, and post only in relevant sections.
  8. Hi every one and have a nice time. Regarding to your answer it is completlly wrong ( sorry ) kennyp !!!!!!!!!!!!! we need a main verb as kennyp said " you got it kennyp. " I depend on one of the University English Doctor.If he is right.
  9. shahsm0ja

    i need helppppp

    Hi Qatar People and have nice time realy I hope to be English teacher to solve this but so sorry.The tahat attractive me to replay is you nice Name.Thank you and I am sorry if I some time seem to be Nossy.
  10. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, every one and have a nice time . I have posted a subject under topic " I need help " so up to this moument no one post any replay !!!!! is the qustion so difficult ? I need urgent responce please thanks.
  11. first try to take out you suny glass the you see the answer after finshing the quiz. Yamala althankyou.by
  12. shahsm0ja

    I need help

    [}:)][}:)][}:)][:(!][:(!][b)][8] Hi Erin And have nice day. Please solve this Question and provied explantory.Thanks A computriezed map of the freeways using information gathered by sensors embedded in the pavement ____________ on a local cable channel during rush hous. (A) airs (B) airing © air (D) to air for your information my ansuer is airring but I doubt of it.thanks
  13. where are you guys I would like to sleep.please answer this Q.Thanks
  14. Hi Erin And have nice day. Please solve this Question and provied explantory.Thanks A computriezed map of the freeways using information gathered by sensors embedded in the pavement ____________ on a local cable channel during rush hous. (A) airs (B) airing © air (D) to air for your information my ansuer is airring but I doubt of it.thanks
  15. OK professor. Have a nice time DON'T BELIVE THE RUMORS.
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