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Dear Toefls, I need someone to rate this essay for me. Thanks for your cooperation. Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In my opinion, I think that watching movies is a very interesting thing for all of us. Specially, when the person is tired of his work and the great responsibilities on him. Sometimes, the person needs to think in a solution for the problem of the actors of the movie. In contrast, the person may like to have some amusement and entertainment. I think that the two cases exist in my personality for the following reasons: First of all, sometimes I come back home very upset of the way the work is going on. I such a case, I need something to make me forget the work problems and may make me laugh. Usually, I go to watch a TV movie and choose one of the funny movies. Most of the time, I feel relax and ready to eat my dinner with my family. Secondly, in case of being clear mind from job, I can not stay with working my mind in anything even it was a movie. The type of movies chosen in such as case is the serious one that contains a story and may be some problems to think in. The most interesting movies for me is the science fiction movies. It helps me to think in unrealistic things and give my mind the chance to run in the thinking space. In a word, watching movies is an interesting action to do. The type of movie to watch depend heavily on the mode of the person watches. If the person is upset, he may like to watch a funny movie. In other times, the person's mind may need to think in unreal things and fill his brain with it.

dear TOEFLs, I hope that my essay be evluated. compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. which way of life do you think would be more staisfying to future generations? Looking to the way of life of my parents and the way of mine, I see that we should follow the way of our parents in life to get the best performance. The reasons for that is as follows: The way of eating todays depends mainly on the take away foods. This way does not give us the benefits of the fresh food which our parents used to eat. The fresh food has alot of proteins and vitamins that our bodies need. This shows that our parents has the right to advice us to leave this fashion way of eating and follow the ordinary way. If I have my baby ill, I will take him/her to the physican to examin him/her and describe a medicine for him/her. Always the chemicals in that medicine have a side effects. This way leads us to have solve one problem and get another one. In contrast, our parents usually uses the natural chemicals exist in the plants and grosses. Nowadays, the world try to go back to nature and use the natural products exist in the earth. This can be a good evidence on how our parents was a great physicans and we should follow their way in curing. In a word, I can not say that our life does not get better with technologies like the different means of transportation. But, the way of life our parents has is the natural way. In my opinion, to be natural in every thing is a good way of life. So, I recommended that we must mix between the natural ways that our parents use and the new technology the we invent. Taking the best advantages of every method should be the way for the future generations.

dear TOEFLs, i hope that you evaluate this essay for me. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some people like to watch the football match on the screen of the television. However, the emotions exist between the fans of the teams are very interesting thing. Personally, I like to attend a football match in the stadium neither watching it on the television screen for the following reasons: Firstly, watching the computation of the television does not give me any thing new. I always set on my sofa watching the different channels. But, if I have the opportunity to attend the match alive, I will not think for a second. It gives me the opportunity a great chance to break the ice surrounded my daily life. The person feels that his blood circulation has been activated as if he is the one who plays in the playground. Secondly, watching the match alone or between your family members is an interested event. It gives me the chance to express my feelings the way I want. However, to exist in the stadium while your team scores a goal is something different. You may jump from your site and shack hands with your neighbor in the site without even knowing him. It gives me the chance to express my feelings in a great way. Finally, watching the match on the TV screen has the advantage of replaying the goal over and over again. However, sitting in the fresh air concentrating with the ball and waiting for a goal is something different. So, because of the previously mentioned reasons, I absolutely agree with the statement says that attending a live performance is the most enjoyable event than watching it on the television screen. Please to hear any comments that help to improve my writting.

dear T-TOTO, this is the correction. I hope it is good. You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice. Nowadays, the traveling person can choose from a different means of transportation. Each mean of transportation has its advantage and disadvantage. In the following few words, I am going to discus the different types of transportation that could be used to travel to a place 40 miles away. Firstly, every individual can use the subways to go where he wants. The subway has the advantage of being fast and cheep. The main disadvantage of using this mean of transportation appears in being always crowded with a lot of people which makes it a completely noisy place. Secondly, the yellow cab is another way to travel. It is preferred because it is very comfortable mean and left you exactly to the needed place. However, the cost of this mean is relatively high. As an example, I can not use the cab to go work every day, or, I will have no money to spend by the end of the month. Thirdly, you can use your own car to go to your job. No one can deny that this mean of transportation is completely perfect. It is comfortable, quite, fast and always available. The biggest challenge in this method appears to be the high concentration needed from the driver all over the road. In a word, it is shown that the different types of transportation have its advantage and disadvantage. Personally, if I have to choose one of these methods, I am going to choose to drive my own car to the place I need. This can be easily explained if I told you that I hate the uncomfortable places. Another reason is that I can not wait for a cab driver to accept to left me to my intended place.

thank you dear for this clearing this point. I'll try again

Dear T-TOTO, I hope that you rate this essay for me. thanks alot You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice. Moving from your home to other place is a difficult experience that the person should not try more than once in his life. This is because that step needs you to try to replace your job with another one near your new home. It also requires you to move your furniture to the new house. There exist a different ways of moving your furniture as I will discus in the following words: As a first choice, you may use a plane to take your stuff to the new home. This method used when the place of the new house is far from the old place. This method has the advantage of being fast and comfortable. However, it suffers from being very expensive. So, I advice the person who may think of using this mean of transportation that he should prepared to pay a lot of money. Second choice will be to use a big trunk and fill it with your stuff. This kind of transportation is a little slow and not safe for your furniture. However, the most important advantage of it appears in its low cost. This kind of transportation is effective when the distance between the two houses is comparatively small. The third choice, you may use your own fan to move the pieces of the furniture one by one until you finish. This method recommended only when you have a small number of pieces and the place you are moving to is not far from the old place. In my opinion, the choosing of one of the three method depends only on the parameters I mentioned before which can be summarize in the number of pieces I have, the distance between the two houses, and finally, can I pay much money or not.

dear TOEFL partner, Today, I write an essay which I think is good. Could you please comment on it. Thanks alot Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice. Every person in life owns his private taste in choosing the items he wants in the way he likes. Some people like the items made by machine. Another people admire the hand made items. Every one has his reasons. From my point of view, I see that the hand made items is better than the machine made one. Firstly, items made by hand take a lot of time and a huge effort to be done. As a consequence, the cost will less than the machine made items because it frugal the cost of the machine and the large number of workers. In spite of being less cost, the prices of these items always higher than the machine made one. In my opinion, I think this is fair. The workers work hardly to get their output as good as the customers expect. So, they deserve to ask for a price for their hard work. Secondly, owners of the factory think in the first place in the profit. Using their machine, as much as the machine produces daily the bigger the profit will be. This leads the workers to do their best in spite of the quality of the output. Obviously, the owners of the factory are the most benefited one from that process. Of course, the cheap price of these items leads to a lot of sales. In a word, the hand made items famous with its good quality. The machine made stuff has its advantage also in its lower prices. In my opinion, I prefer to good quality on the lower price.

Dear, I have a new essay, would you please rate it for me showing the errors. Thanks alot. Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer The friends considered as one of the most important factors of success in life. How to choose your friend plays an effective role in the relations between you. Some people keep secrets, some do not. You can share your experience with a lot of your friends, but you can only share your fears, and future plans with your close one. Personally, I have a lot of friends. In contrast, when I need to spend time with them I choose one or two of my close friends. In the next few words, I will discus my reasons for that: Every human has his own secrets which he should not share it with the whole community. The close friends are the only persons who could know these secrets and suggests a solution for it in the case you have some problem with these secrets. Considering this point of view, when I need to share some of my secrets, I need my close friends to share it with me. However, this is not the case when a large number of friends attend that meeting. In a situation like that, our speaking will be general and none of the personal matters could be presented. On the other hand, spending time with a large number of friends gives you the opportunity to keep on touch with the news of every one of them. Also, you can share the new experience that every one passes through. This is can not be satisfied where you have only one of two friends. In a word, we see that meeting of the friends is a very exciting matter. In my opinion, the benefits that I will get in spending time with my close friends will be much greater than the one I will get from the large group of friends.

Thank you dear very much. I will try my best.

dear friends, this is my second trial in writing. I hope that you rate it for me. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In a physics experiment, how much time do you think it takes you to finish the experiment. You have to prepare the lab, run your experiment, gets the results, and then compares it with the standard results. An experiment like this can take a long time than you think. Using the new technology in education like simulation, it can save much time for the student to learn another experiment in the same period one experiment takes to finish. From this point of view, I strongly agree with the sentence says that the technology can help students to learn more information, and learn it quickly. On one hand, looking to the performance factor, we can look to the new technology in education. For instant, the simulation can help the student to watch the whole experiment without leaving his chair. He/she can see how can he/she prepare his/her tools and in which way can he/she run the experiment and score the results he/she gets and then a final comparison appear to show the difference between the ideal results and the obtained results. On the other hand, from the economic view point, it is obvious that the technology can save a lot of money and effort to the teacher. For example, if the teacher uses a computerized presentation to show to his students how to solve a mathematical equation. This can protect him from the shock on the board and he can repeat the piece of information more and more times until the students get the information. Finally, we can not say that the standard methods of teaching is bad or does not get the expect results, but especially in the education process, we can improve our performance and save our money and effort using the new technologies available.

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Dear TOEFL friends, I need someone to evaluate my first essay on "are our parents the best teacher". Here is the essay: One day when I was in the third year of my prep school, our neighbor came to school and takes me to home. This is when I knew that my father has been died. Since this happened, my mother takes care of our family as if my father still exists. I can say that looking to her patient and courage facing the life and taking care of four children, teaches us how to be a hard person facing our difficulties in the life. In contrast, I think that the parents are not the best teacher we have ever known. On one hand, in the child's first few years, the first impressions about life have been taken from his parents. The way of talking, walking, dressing, the way of eating his food and even his basic morals is taken from his parents. On the other hand, the parents can not teach everything in our life. For example, they can not teach us how to deal with people or how to choose our friends. This is because they can not face the people in the same way we face it and because they must give their child the chance to get involved with the outside world and get his own experience. Finally, I see that our parents have a great influence on our general behavior and we can consider them as the first teacher. But they can not be considered as the best teacher the human could have. please let me know you opinion even with a symbol. thanks

Dear all, I have a Toefl test on June 28th and I need a speaking partner. I'm from Egypt. I can be exist to chat at 1 am (in my time) and 5 pm (in my time too). My account at yahoo is mohammed_fatehy@yahoo.com. Hope to see you soon. Yours Kaleza:idea:

Hi dear, I have registered for my test on June 28th, and I need speaking partner too. My skype ID is mohammed.fatehy. See you.

Hi Dear, I have a TOEFL on Jone 28th and I also need a partner(s). I'm from Egypt. If you please I'll add you to my contact list. My mail is mohammed.fatehy@skype.com. Is your name in skype is govi_sumathi@skype.com. Thanks