Working conditions changes in the time. Nowadays there are no differences between teenagers and their parents to earn money to struggle in the their life.
Primarily, however I support the idea of that working while you are still a student is not a good idea. Because you have to concentrate your lessons otherwise you can not be successful, ??I don't know that does it mean?[/red]but most student must to do this, nowadays different people have different needs. Everybody has to work and students as well. Even especially students have to. If a student wants to support his/her family economically it is an obligation to work besides to study.that they have to work andstudy at the same time.
Secondly, sometimes working is an enjoyment for people. They work besides to study to have fun and to spend their time. If so, working can be useful rather than being tiring. That is Because, that work becomes an instrument that people can recharge and escape from all their problems.
To sum up, what I want to say is, nobody wants to work while they are attending a school[red]. but economic or social situations some times forces students to work however I don't support this.
:)Honestly, It's really tough for me to modify your essay.What I can do is just correct some grammer mistakes in it. But I think you'd better write this topic again for it's a little bit away from the topic.
[banana]Don't worry, It's just my point of view. And you still have plenty of time to practise.
