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my second writing, help me to revise it plz! Computer technology, with its wide application into nearly all industries even the smallest unit of the society----family, has become more and more important and showed its huge power. Undoubtedly, grasping this power weapon can benefit the whole nation. The government, which has to deal with different problems in its community, now has to consider possibility to spend more money on developing computer technology. Personally, I believe that how to answer this question depends on the realistic conditions in a country. In some countries, where most of people lack basic facilities and even have not enough food, the governments should give up idea of investing much money on this new technology. Every government should have their prime problems. For these countries, it is definitely more urgent to solve people¡¯s realistic problems. If they pay more their attentions on computer technologies, some serious troubles may be appeared. Finally the governments, on the one hand have no fund to solve these new problems such as poverty, diseases and so on; on the other hand, they waste much money on new technologies and can¡¯t get great progress, because their fund compared with what the technologies really need is not very abundant. Under this circumstance, it is obviously very danger for any government! On the other hand, for those countries that have enough ability to develop computer technology, I recommend they investigate more money on this new flourished field. The reasons will be provided as follows: Firstly, as a new kind of technology, computer has showed powerful energy in many fields. Today, in almost all fields, there is very wide use, such as medicine, manufacture, building, design and so on. Computer has turn to be hands of human beings to explore unknown world and create more comfortable lives. Secondly, this new technology can bring people extreme convenience. Related technologies such as communicate technology that has shorted the distance between people all over the world, just based on the development of computers. Today, people can use the Internet to exchange ideas, purchase all kinds of goods, and learn about information. All of these can be brought by the computer technology. Thirdly, undoubtedly, there are huge commercial interests in the computer industry and other relative industries. Nowadays major companies in our world are of computer industries such as Microsoft, IBM and Intel. These big companies can make huge interest for their local people. In conclusion, computer technologies will become more and more important on future. Any government if it has enough ability to deal with them, has to pay one eye on the development of computer.

This is my first post,plz any advices and suggustions. thank you!:) In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. Whether teenagers get jobs or not when they are still in school is always a hot issue for parents and educators. Most people support such an opinion that students should pay more attention on their studies. Personally, I cannot refuse the suggestion that students may have some voluble jobs. But I want to proclaim a condition: It must be after students successfully finished their studies. As students, joining into some work has some advantages that are detailed as follows. Firstly, students can contact with some practical works that they cannot learn from books. After hard working on a subject, it is undoubtedly a good thing if they can acquire related practice from a given job. For example, my major is automotive engineering, when my classmates finished the class ¡°automotive engineering¡±, most of us went to a factory to get a part-time job. As a result, while we got salary we understood the knowledge deeply. Secondly, students can learn about the society early and a real job can give them a chance to learn how to deal with all kinds of difficulties. Although we often call school a small community, as a student one only have a few chances to learn about the real society. Early job help them find their shortcomings, which cannot be found during their school lives. In addition, when students work in a work team, they can learn how to deal with the relationship with other members and how to present their own suggestions. I can assert that this knowledge is as important as those theories from books. Further more, definitely, students would more understand the value of money. After making money by one¡¯s hands, after hard work ¡¢competition with others and special experience which can¡¯t even be imagined, one would grow up and become mature. Then, one can attain the power that urges them to go ahead. Cherishing what one have had turn to be important. The future can be found on today. On the other hand, I insist on that, for students, study is the more important than any other things. Anything whatever you do, you should consider your study. If you have no time and energy to deal with your study, you¡¯d better keep you mind on your books.