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Why young people get involved in crimes? reasons? solutions?
People are worried about involvement of younger generation in different types of crime.There are several reasons why this is happening,and there are several measure which could be taken to decrease in numbers of crimes done by young people.
In today’s busy world where both parents work full-times,their children have freedom to do any activities,as a result,their children can come in contact with bad company and after that they involve in crimes. In addition,some young people lack support from parents in their early age. Secondly, some students drop out from schools in their early age and after that they join gangs.Thirdly, most young people spend more time watching television and playing video games which encourage them to fight, and also give them ideas about how crimes can be done.
There are several steps should be taken to prevent this younger people to offend crimes.First initiative which should be taken by parents is to observe their children until they become dependant and better citizen. Second initiative might be taken by police.By which I mean, Police should monitor students who drop out from schools.
Lastly but not least, government should censor movies and television programmes. There should be age limits for every types of programmes and movies.
In conclusion, it is impossible to eradicate all crimes those are offended by young criminals but if the measures that I have mentioned above are taken, we might see a considerable reduce in numbers of crime by young people which is necessary for countries development and better world.
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