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Thank you very much in advance, Looking forward, Katrin

Hi guys! Could you please tell me what my score would be in IELTS if I wrote like this? Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. It is an undeniable fact that upon emerge of technology in today’s world, a great abundant of house chores including culinary art and preparing food have been facilitated. But the question that needs to be answered is that whether or not this change is for better or for worse. What follows is the explanation of advantages and disadvantages of this massive change in human’s life. Mothers, who usually carry out the responsibility of preparing food, are spending an increasing number of hours at work in order to afford a small amount of the many expenditures of their children’s life. This eventually results in their absence from home and facing lack of time when it comes to food preparation and other house chores. This is the time when microwave ovens, food processors, and other culinary accessories could be great helps to mothers in the hectic modern life. With pressing a small button, nowadays, making even the most challenging type of food has become easier and faster than one could imagine. Mothers without any doubt could not be any happier when they can easily and conveniently carry out the important task of making food at home and enjoy the relief of concerns regarding fast food and its disadvantages to the family including obesity. On the other hand, there is a dark side of the view. Statistics show that the rate of cancer caused by microwave made food, and the unsafe rays which penetrate in the food is increasing which is obviously even more dangerous than obesity. The jeopardising effects of using microwave go far beyond human’s health. Scientists believe that the dangerous rays which are emitted from microwaves go to the atmosphere and can lead to a kind of pollution, which is invisible and cannot be easily controlled and would consequently endanger all species in the world. While technology seems to have been playing an imperative role in the family especially for those mothers who prefer to make food at home rather than buy readymade ones, there are still concerns regarding its demerits. It seems that raising mother’s awareness about the possible dangers of modern ways of food preparation, and providing more environmentally friendly choices of kitchen appliances would help families in making sound decisions.