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People all over the world attend college or university for multiple reasons. From where I stand, the mainly considered aspects when people want to attend to college or university will be the prospects after graduate from the college or university, parents’ will, and the social pressure. In the developed or developing countries, the occupations of the most respectful groups or companies acquire for the higher degree of the applicants. In that circumstance, people without a doubt pursue a higher degree for the future development. For instance, a bachelor degree is so ordinary in the modern societies that even a small company’s staff are all come from the universities of all kinds, leaving no advantages to them when compete with their colleagues. Another good case could be made that the most senior executives of any institutes or groups have the tendency to have a higher degree that the other. Another factor of great importance why people want to go to the college or university is the parents’ will. Lots of children nowadays actually do not want to go to the college or university, simple because their parents ask them to do so for the future purposes. They are told to study hard in class whether they like the subject or like. The social pressed on us makes us feel that it is necessary to pursue high degree for a better life. The housing conditions or respected positions are all closely linked to the degree. In all, I propose the people who want to get a job quickly and a better future to attend the college and university first.

It is well organised in the passage above,but the sentence is too long to read.I think it would be better to use more short sentences to convey the meaning of your idea.

People all over the world attend college or university for multiple reasons. From where I stand, the mainly considered aspects when people want to attend to college or university will be the prospects after graduate from the college or university, parents’ will, and the social pressure. In the developed or developing countries, the occupations of the most respectful groups or companies acquire for the higher degree of the applicants. In that circumstance, people without a doubt pursue a higher degree for the future development. For instance, a bachelor degree is so ordinary in the modern societies that even a small company’s staff are all come from the universities of all kinds, leaving no advantages to them when compete with their colleagues. Another good case could be made that the most senior executives of any institutes or groups have the tendency to have a higher degree that the other. Another factor of great importance why people want to go to the college or university is the parents’ will. Lots of children nowadays actually do not want to go to the college or university, simple because their parents ask them to do so for the future purposes. They are told to study hard in class whether they like the subject or like. The social pressed on us makes us feel that it is necessary to pursue high degree for a better life. The housing conditions or respected positions are all closely linked to the degree. In all, I propose the people who want to get a job quickly and a better future to attend the college and university first. People all over the world attend college or university for multiple reasons. From where I stand, the mainly considered aspects when people want to attend to college or university will be the prospects after graduate from the college or university, parents’ will, and the social pressure.