Is this a correct template to use in writing independent task....please correct me if there are any mistakes..
Independent Writing Task
Introduction
Some people think that [opinion1]. Others think that [opinion2]. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion a closer examination reveals that [take position] for several reasons. I will explain my position providing examples to support my point of view.
First paragraph
One reason is [reason 1]. For example, [example 1]. Clearly, [restate position].
Second paragraph
Another reason is [reason 2]. To illustrate this point, I can write about how [example 2]. Therefore, [restate position].
Third paragraph
On the other hand, some may argue that [reason other opinion]. For example [examplex other opinion]. However, [cast doubt other opinion]. Conclusion
In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that it is better to [opinion1/opinion2], because all the reasons mentioned above.