astalayista

It's pity that such an excellent work that has never been replied! Your response is actually the best one I've ever read. Each example you show is perfectly matched the idea you wanna tell us. You deserve Score 6！ Keep posting！

Don't worry. One month is long enough for your preparation. Keep practice everyday and each time you finish one topic try to google the same topic that are practiced by others, you surely get some different standpoint and have a better sense of how to improve your skills on organizing your response logically. Back to your response. Personally, everything is great about your examples and reasons. You can be better if you could look closely on the topic. It just mentions Food ways is the best ways, other than what you are against-the only way. So it's a little bit stray from the point.