Hello TM staff. Please you check my second essay and notify me how well structured and answered it is.
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Questions
Should government spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
In order to improve the efficiency of a transport network, apart from improving roads and highways, governments should definitely spend more money on public transport (buses, trains and subways). The following essay will specify the reasons for doing so.
Firstly, spending more money on improving public transport (buses, trains and subways) on major routes linking metropolis cities would certainly ease traffic congestion, particularly during the peak-hour period. This could be done by increasing the passenger bus fleet and adding more carriages to commuter trains and subways, travelling to densely-populated neighbouring cities.
Secondly, a reduction in the number of motorists driving to and from work, school, college or other general activities would result in lower air pollution. For example, most State and Federal governments, particularly in Australia intend on maintaining a cleaner environment. Although, it can be argued that buses usually run on diesel resulting in air pollution, a government would then seek for alternative sources of fuel such as natural gas. The operation of natural gas-powered buses is currently taking place throughout Australia’s major cities and states. Also, most commuter trains and subways are powered by electricity.
Lastly, the regular use of public transport would improve worker, student and teacher punctuality. Motorists belonging to this respective occupancy would greatly benefit from avoiding delays in looking for parking space.
As a student who regularly attends classes and other activities everyday, I strongly encourage governments to spend more money on public transport to improve efficiency.