All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Studying abroad as part of one’s education at any level can be a very important step towards increasing the quality of their studies and broadening their viewpoints, among other benefits.
While it is perfectly feasible to receive high-quality education without leaving a country, going away for a semester or two can be beneficial in more ways than one. First of all, experiencing the education system and the teaching methods in another country, can contribute positively to creativity and the learning process of a student. Having myself studied abroad for a year, I can claim that experiencing the education system of my own country and another country, allowed me to amalgamate the diverse knowledge I received at different institutions.
Furthermore, many claim that one of the important aspects of attending a college or university is the opportunity to meet new people, peers, as well as the instructors, which might provide better future education and career opportunities. Therefore, widening a pool of contacts from another country might significantly increase the future prospects of any student.
Finally, I believe that being open-minded and familiar with other cultures is an important precondition for being a better thinker. Living in another country, if the primary language in that country is different from one’s own, can allow for mastering another language, and bilingualism has been proven to improve the functioning of the brain, along with the obvious benefits of allowing to become familiar with the professional literature on one’s field of study from the original source.
In conclusion, having an international experience is paramount in achieving success in any field, as students absorb new knowledge from different sources and in different setting. Having a positive attitude and an open mind to learn as much as possible in often unfamiliar ways, can only benefit a student even further.
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