sukanyadass07

Congratulations.......best of luck for the future..Actually I have already posted but no suggestions received as yet...anyway ..my Gre is in a week...so just a bit nervous-ed ..I would highly appreciate if u share ur experience and when was ur GRE??..How was ur other papers??

Thanks a lot..I got the concept very well...:orange:

hey, your essay is very cogent in all respects. Moreover it has properly articulated all the facts of the two sided-coin. Great Job. I think you can score more than 5 on this essay. Best of luck.

Hi, Your essay has good enough reasoning. But the length of the essay too small I guess.. you need to stretch a bit by giving more such examples for the advantage and disadvantage...otherwise it is good enough to score more than 4...best of luck.

Hey, Your essay has very strong points and reasons...also express your vocab strength beautifully...you can improve a bit by giving some live examples..may be Amartya Sen the famous economist, how he has benefited our country, India...or other relevant examples like Gandhiji how he used his study of abroad was used in Independence of India..which can exemplify your points more soundly. Your essay will score more than 4 surely. Hope u find this helpful.

Hi, Going thru your analysis, I found it to be very logical but you can enhance it by giving a few more examples like the one you have given about Einstein. Very good in reasoning...but you can elaborate more on the advantages and disadvantages which can make your essay more sound and a bit lengthy. Use some good words to express your vocab also. A rating of 3.5- 4 will be given to this essay. Please don't take it personally. Hope that helps you!..best of luck.

If a Ans: 1. 0 2. 20 3. 40 4. 60 5. 80 Please provide the solution with explanation and some sample questions like the above problem. Please provide some tips to crack such types of problems. Assistance is highly appreciated!!!! :orange:

Hello Friends, Please rate my Argument below and provide suggestions how to improve it. Will be waiting for the reply.:apple: The following appeared in a memo from the Mayor of the city of Hillview: “In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.” The recommendation of the setting up the automobile manufacturing plant in Hillview in order to facilitate thousands of unemployed can have the following arguments. Firstly, it is required to find out the exact reason behind why Computech comapny left the place. It may happen so that they were facing a dearth of skillful and cheap labors. If that is so then Hillview must invest profusely in the training of the residents so that once a company sets up its facility it should not face any resource problem with respect to skill set. Secondly, It is not necessary that the employee who were once employed in the Computech are willing to change their course of career and get started with automobile industry. They may have left the city of Hillview and gone in the search of job which is more pertinent for them. So it may happen so that once Autotech is developed they may not get the willing and stalwart labors that would devote their energy seamlessly. Thirdly,the suggested undeveloped land may not be that suitable for the Autotech since it has not specified whether it is away from the residential area or not, since the waste products of the factory can cause obnoxious effects on the health of the people living nearby. More over it also do not properly justify the availability of all the resources that could be required for setting of the automobile manufacturing plant, just to provide jobs to unemployed cannot be the only justification. In addition the land may not be used now but who will determine that it can be used in farming and agriculture in later time. This can also diminish the unemployment of the city Hillview. Thus by attracting the Autotech Company to build a automobile plant in Hillview can be propitious but does not aptly justify that to fight with the curse of unemployment it is the sole way of blessing. Many internal and external factors need to be clarified appropriately while deciding on this matter.