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Topic: Some people think that the sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co operate become more useful adults. Discuss and give your opinion Answer: In today's modern world, the level of competition among children have rose immense due to rise in percentage share of younger generation, limited number of resources and improved standard of education. Some believe that a sense of competition should be encouraged among children to make them more successful. While, others argue that coorporation rather than competition can develop better individuals and ultimately better members of our society. There is no denying the fact, that it is the sense of competition that can assist children in knowing what their target is and therefore encourage them to work with more zeal and enthusiam. In addition, it is only through competition we will be able to differentiate the best and capable children from the rest. Furthermore, every child will put his hardwork to compete against eachother and therefore there will be no free-riders. On the contrary, there are also number of benefits that children can gain by working collectiively. Firstly, they will be better able to work in teams. Secondly, in order to succeed every child will be motivated to contribute the best he/she can. Lastly, even the children who are not capable enough to work on their own will also be able to perform well and avoid getting discouraged because of "fear of failure". To conclude, after analyzing both sides of the topic we can comprehend that neither competition or coorporation can benefit along. Children should be encouraged to compete and also at times coorporate with each other to achieve the best results. Thanks Muhammad