Hi Madam :
1. You did not define your thesis ..
2. Your paragraphs are not defined
3. I thing you describe only body of issue
I have learnt more from this practice so if you want to study with me so contact me at
Moderator edit: Your contact information (or request for contact information) has been removed for your own protection and to conform with forum rules. Please use the PM system to contact forum members (Quick link: Send a PM). For more information, please see the forum rules. If you have any questions at all, please ask us in the feedback forum. :)
I am going to give GRE in Jan, 2013