Could you please score me IELTS Writing 1. Thank you in advance.
Writing 1
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The chats reflect result of inquiry about aims and fees sources for studying of adults.
According to the graph interest in subject was mentioned by 40% of mature student what makes it the most widespread reason. 2% less respondents were about to gain qualifications.
Work-related issues make considerable impact on decision to study, 22% of surveyed expect it to be helpful for current job and 12% want to change a job and 20% looked forward improving prospects of promotion. The same number of people went on studying because they enjoy the process.
Finally meeting people is in the end of the reasons list with 9%.
Concerning studying fees survey showed following results: the main part of 40% must be provided by individuals, 35% of costs are going to be covered by employer and the last 20% remain to be shared by taxpayers.
So further education could be caused by variety if commitment either it could be feed by range of sources.
