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Hi Mike, Thanks a lot for your kind reply. I really appreciate that. This is the recent essay I wrote.Please advice me on what I have to do to improve my writing. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks a lot again Nad A large percentage of ex-prisoners reoffend shortly after being released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What steps could be taken to try to reduce the reoffending rate? It is no doubt that after committing serious crime, criminals should get punishment for the misdeeds they have done. As a punishment they may often sentence for many years in prison. So the law abiding people in society may relieved by assuming that they may be safe after criminals being punished, hoping these offenders will reform after spend years in jail. But in certainty, due to release on parole and rejecting by the society may often cause them to reoffend crime, soon after their release from prisons. We must acknowledge that prisons attempt to rehabilitate the offenders during their sentenced period. But in the reality these criminals may apply for parole and may release before even end of their sentence. Therefore prisons may fail to rehabilitate them and these criminals may continue to commit an offence shortly after being released from the prison. Secondly, even after release by the end of the sentenced period, ex-offenders try to re-enter to society and try to be a better person. But actually they often become victims themselves by unable to find work and incapable of having normal family life and often rejected by the society. This will soon cause the ex prisoners to commit crime again and end up in the prison all over again. As a solution, many people believe that offering more severe punishment like corporal or capital punishment will solve this problem. But as a humans idea of beating and executing someone is repellent to human being. Instead of that, charge them with large sum of fine or offer them to community service are better alternatives to reduce reoffending rate in the society. However I prefer not to rough only on the criminals but on the root of the crime itself. We should spend less money on lawyers, police or whoever work on the legal system and put the money instead of supporting deprived areas which are the breeding grounds for crime. These will help to reduce reoffending rate in the society in future.

Thanx a lot for the reply. I did Ielts in oct 2012 & got 7 for all except writing. It is the difficult part for me. And also can you please guide me with this? I don't know what to do. Do I need to get 7.5, if I am applying for F1 programme? I have a letter from the Dean, confirming that I have completed the studies in English. Is it possible for me to give that for excemption when applying for F1? GMC didn't accept it as I am graduated in 2009. Please help :( thnx a lot

Hi there I just joined this forum. I really need some advice from you. I graduated from Russia too. Currently I am living in UK. I have not completed my ielts and so frustrated with this. Sometimes thinking to give up but this is the only option I have left. Please can u please reply me. I really need advice from you. please be kind enough to reply me soon. I am waiting for your reply thnx a lot tc