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Thank you very much for advice Mike:)hope I can cope with my drawbacks.

Hi shahji Recently i passed IELTS exam and got 6 points(General Training).Please help me to get more and improve my English.Here is my essay.Please correct my mistakes and how much points i can get? Compare the advantages and disadvantages of 3 of the following as media communicating information.State which you consider to be the most effective. I choose books,tv,movies. There are different sources to get information and to use it in appropriate way.We watch TV,read newspapers and books,listen to the radio,go to the theatres and etc.All these activities allow us to gain more and detailed information about themes which we are interested in.But if I talk about the benefits of getting information with help of various sources,thus there are some of them which I consider most effective and use them frequently. Firstly I would like to emphasize that books play a vital and essential role in our life.I can't imagine one day without them,simply because i tend to use vocabulary or other resources in order to fill in the gaps in my knowledge.As a source books are very important in our day to day life.But there are some disadvantages of using them.People whose life is very intensive and they have hard working day everyday,they really are tired of reading or doing something else.Such people prefer to watch TV in order to release their pressure after hard working day.But generally TV helps us to be informed about all events which take place in our life.Moreover watching Tv,we got knowledge about different countries,about it's habitat,about history and etc. But there are also some dimerits of wathing TV.In my opinion some programs should be restricted or eliminated at all,because they could have negative impact on people's behaviour and on society in whole.This is not only one reason which reflect the disadvantages of using TV.Moreover watching TV during a long period of time causes damage on person's health.It can afflict eyesight and therefore leads to bad consequences.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of books and TV I tend to take more attention to enlightening with the help of books.I consider,that books,journals,newspapes,and various interesting articles can be more essential and beneficial than television programmes.But some people prefer to watch films instead of reading books about the same movies.In other words people become lazy,they persue one aim -to watch that movie which is very popular among youngsters.They don't want to realize that the very essential way to get information about new story is to read the book about this story.I consider ,that the books contain more comprehensive and detailed information about facts and events which may will not be shown in the film. In conclusion ,i would like to highlight that different resources of media have as merits as well as dimerits of using them.So every person should act in accordance with his/her willing using some of them.

Hi to everyone! Recently i passed IELTS exam and got 6 points(General Training).Please help me to get more and improve my English.Here is my essay.Please correct my mistakes and how much points i can get? Compare the advantages and disadvantages of 3 of the following as media communicating information.State which you consider to be the most effective. I choose books,tv,movies. There are different sources to get information and to use it in appropriate way.We watch TV,read newspapers and books,listen to the radio,go to the theatres and etc.All these activities allow us to gain more and detailed information about themes which we are interested in.But if I talk about the benefits of getting information with help of various sources,thus there are some of them which I consider most effective and use them frequently. Firstly I would like to emphasize that books play a vital and essential role in our life.I can't imagine one day without them,simply because i tend to use vocabulary or other resources in order to fill in the gaps in my knowledge.As a source books are very important in our day to day life.But there are some disadvantages of using them.People whose life is very intensive and they have hard working day everyday,they really are tired of reading or doing something else.Such people prefer to watch TV in order to release their pressure after hard working day.But generally TV helps us to be informed about all events which take place in our life.Moreover watching Tv,we got knowledge about different countries,about it's habitat,about history and etc. But there are also some dimerits of wathing TV.In my opinion some programs should be restricted or eliminated at all,because they could have negative impact on people's behaviour and on society in whole.This is not only one reason which reflect the disadvantages of using TV.Moreover watching TV during a long period of time causes damage on person's health.It can afflict eyesight and therefore leads to bad consequences.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of books and TV I tend to take more attention to enlightening with the help of books.I consider,that books,journals,newspapes,and various interesting articles can be more essential and beneficial than television programmes.But some people prefer to watch films instead of reading books about the same movies.In other words people become lazy,they persue one aim -to watch that movie which is very popular among youngsters.They don't want to realize that the very essential way to get information about new story is to read the book about this story.I consider ,that the books contain more comprehensive and detailed information about facts and events which may will not be shown in the film. In conclusion ,i would like to highlight that different resources of media have as merits as well as dimerits of using them.So every person should act in accordance with his/her willing using some of them.

Hi to everyone! Recently i passed IELTS exam and got 6 points(General Training).Please help me to get more and improve my English.Here is my essay.Please correct my mistakes and how much points i can get? Compare the advantages and disadvantages of 3 of the following as media communicating information.State which you consider to be the most effective. I choose books,tv,movies. There are different sources to get information and to use it in appropriate way.We watch TV,read newspapers and books,listen to the radio,go to the theatres and etc.All these activities allow us to gain more and detailed information about themes which we are interested in.But if I talk about the benefits of getting information with help of various sources,thus there are some of them which I consider most effective and use them frequently. Firstly I would like to emphasize that books play a vital and essential role in our life.I can't imagine one day without them,simply because i tend to use vocabulary or other resources in order to fill in the gaps in my knowledge.As a source books are very important in our day to day life.But there are some disadvantages of using them.People whose life is very intensive and they have hard working day everyday,they really are tired of reading or doing something else.Such people prefer to watch TV in order to release their pressure after hard working day.But generally TV helps us to be informed about all events which take place in our life.Moreover watching Tv,we got knowledge about different countries,about it's habitat,about history and etc. But there are also some dimerits of wathing TV.In my opinion some programs should be restricted or eliminated at all,because they could have negative impact on people's behaviour and on society in whole.This is not only one reason which reflect the disadvantages of using TV.Moreover watching TV during a long period of time causes damage on person's health.It can afflict eyesight and therefore leads to bad consequences.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of books and TV I tend to take more attention to enlightening with the help of books.I consider,that books,journals,newspapes,and various interesting articles can be more essential and beneficial than television programmes.But some people prefer to watch films instead of reading books about the same movies.In other words people become lazy,they persue one aim -to watch that movie which is very popular among youngsters.They don't want to realize that the very essential way to get information about new story is to read the book about this story.I consider ,that the books contain more comprehensive and detailed information about facts and events which may will not be shown in the film. In conclusion ,i would like to highlight that different resources of media have as merits as well as dimerits of using them.So every person should act in accordance with his/her willing using some of them.