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Passage 1 Total words 175 The given diagram describes the process of making yogurt. It can be seen that there are six steps in this process. At the first step, we keep milk in a pot at 90 degree Celsius or 200 degree Fahrenheit for around 30 minutes. It is noticeable that we get more thick yogurt if we keep it for more time like this. Then, the second step is to let the milk cool until temperature reaches 44 degree Celsius. Next, live bacteria are mixed into the milk which is also known as Yogurt starter. Now at the fourth step, again milk cools down for around 4 hours until temperature reaches 37 degree Celsius or 100 degree Fahrenheit. At the fifth step, the yogurt is almost ready and we keep it in the refrigerator for cooling purpose. After that, we add some sugar and strawberries. At this stage, yogurt is ready to eat. Finally, small cups are filled and packed with fresh yogurt and kept in a delivery van. Then, delivery van ships the packets to the stores. Passage 2 Total words 175 The given table shows the sales of a coffee shop at four different time on a weekday in an office building. It can be seen that at 7.30-10.30, pastries sale is the highest in the whole day and slightly more than coffee, while sandwiches have lowest sale in the morning, which is equal to sale of tea in the afternoon. Sale of tea is highest in the morning than the rest of the day, which is 110. It is noticeable that sandwiches sale at 200 is the highest at the lunch time. However, coffee sale is 185 and pastries sale decreases to 95 from 275. At 2.30-5.30, pastries sale again increases to 150. In contrast, sandwiches sale decreases to 40, but slightly higher than tea which 35 the lowest sale in the whole day. In the night time, pastries sale decreases and sandwiches sale increases to 110. Similarly, sales of coffee and tea also increase. It is clear that coffee has almost the similar sale throughout the day. By contrast, rest of the products has some variations in their sale.

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Topic: Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students. Why is physical education important? Should physical education classes be required or optional? My essay is: Total words 274 Nowadays, physical education is very common in schools. As schools want their students to stay healthy and fit with the help of physical education. Some people believe that it should be mandatory as part of their academic course, whereas on the other side some disagree and say it should be optional. In my point of view I believe physical education plays a very important role in student life. I have some strong reasons to believe this. Let me discuss in detail. Firstly, I would like to support my opinion with the statement that “physical education helps students to develop their interest in sports”. As many times a child does not know what he/she can do other than studies and in this way becomes unaware of the advantages of sports in his/her life. Secondly, sometimes a student gets bored while doing repetitive curricular activities on a daily basis and wants to do something new and full of excitement. At that time physical education can be a good solution to get rid of boredom as it provides refreshment to the student physically and mentally. On the other hand the flip side of the coin presents a different picture as some people believe that because of physical education students lose their interest in studies. Many times students get over involved in sports and do not pay enough time on academics. In the end, as we see there are many aspects of this question, but in my opinion people should understand the value of physical education because this is good physical and mental exercise for the students. But students should maintain a balance between the sports and academics. Thanks in advance :)