Ahmadmukhtiar

Please grade my essay and give me a band score rite about the following topic: Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Some people hold the opinion that a common man should have free access to art galleries and museums; others, however disagree and think it should be available on cost so that artists are helped financially. The first group, who are in favour of cost-free entry to art related entertainments, say that it is the basic right of every citizen to have access to national museums because it depicts history of a nation. Further, they stress encouraging people to participate in art exhibitions is kind of healthy activity. Lastly as more people suffer from financial problems now-a-days; so it is not advisable to impose charges as it would significantly reduce the number of visitors. However, there is other group who has strong feelings that it is not wise to have free entries. Firstly, it would not help the art in general, and the artists particularly. The artists must have a stable source of income as to support themselves. The same thing applies to museums as it must generate revenue in order to support its various costs and without an income source it is hard to sustain it very self. Lastly, they argue that it will generate a sense of recognition and importance in a common man as some thing done as paid is usually worthy. In conclusion, i suggest an awareness needs to be created among general public about financial aspect of entry fees and they should be persuaded to pay as they enter. This money is necessary for art to live and progress.

Task I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear……………………… A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening Dear Omar, I was overwhelmingly happy to hear that you are coming home tomorrow morning. Unfortunately, i will be leaving today to attend my friend's marriage ceremony and will come by tomorrow evening. However, i will leave the keys under door mate and you will get them easily and enter into the house without any difficulty. As i heard, you are coming by train and will probably reach at 8 am. I suggest you should come by a bus as it is economical and the stop, where you will leave the bus, is nearer to my house. It will hardly take 15 minutes to take you from train station to home. You should take some good rest after you reach home. I shall be at home in the evenings. We will go to eat pizza at river side and watch a movie later at night. I shall be looking forward to our great company. Yours truely, Ahmad.

Write about the following topic: Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Some people hold the opinion that a common man should have free access to art galleries and museums; others, however disagree and think it should be available on cost so that artists are helped financially. The first group, who are in favour of cost-free entry to art related entertainments, say that it is the basic right of every citizen to have access to national museums because it depicts history of a nation. Further, they stress encouraging people to participate in art exhibitions is kind of healthy activity. Lastly as more people suffer from financial problems now-a-days; so it is not advisable to impose charges as it would significantly reduce the number of visitors. However, there is other group who has strong feelings that it is not wise to have free entries. Firstly, it would not help the art in general, and the artists particularly. The artists must have a stable source of income as to support themselves. The same thing applies to museums as it must generate revenue in order to support its various costs and without an income source it is hard to sustain it very self. Lastly, they argue that it will generate a sense of recognition and importance in a common man as some thing done as paid is usually worthy. In conclusion, i suggest an awareness needs to be created among general public about financial aspect of entry fees and they should be persuaded to pay as they enter. This money is necessary for art to live and progress.