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  1. You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: · introduce yourself · explain what experience and special skills you have · explain why you are interested in the job Dear Sir/madam, I have seen your advertisement about a job working in City Museum shop in holidays. My name is ........... and I’m 28 years old and my English language is quiet well. I can speak fluently however you will understand in interview time if you giving me a chance to have a meeting face to face, Actually from my early youth I have interested in ancient articles specially some stuff that belong our ancestors. I believe that these priceless things should be more attendant. Therefore with this passion I read a lot about the articles and almost know more that for instance in which year they found out and what kind of group find them. So it’s really fascinating that all visitors should know, I believe that increasing general knowledge about something special could enhance people eagerness to following it and also come to Museum. I could be a good advertisement, passionate could motivate people to care more about their countries and also persuade other nationalities to come and visit their Museum so I thing I’m good in leading a group of people and talk more about museum articles ,I would be glad to share my knowledge and I reckon it’s honorable. Thank you in advance and I’m waiting for your kind reply . Yours faithfully,
  2. please guide me by this one Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens? Nowadays some people believes that wealthy nations must share their properties with poorer nations that can’t provide things as food or education, but on the contrary, the other consider that this huge responsibilities should be tackle by their government not other wealthy nations. I’m completely agree with first group who consider other wealthy nations shouldn't overlook the poorer nations , it’s totally related to human-being and we should condolence and sympathy with others by providing them such a background as providing education chance. We should assist some nations that face with some disasters such as famine, drought, earthquake and etc. it’s just a way to express our sympathy. The better way is improving education, they can construct their country by themselves so one way is to enhancing education and have a chance for leading at least a small region, so they have enough enthusiasm to improve their country, and if in one country people get progress no one try to immigrate to other countries and stay to his mother country beside his relatives, so I want to say that immigration is leave poor situation and just go to developed country. Therefore if other wealthy nations help poorer one, they can avoid many hazards after that and also improve their life level. In other hand they can stop immigration and stay on their home country and build it. So with this approach, world become more beautiful and people get close to each other by helping each other.
  3. please rate this! You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic: Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. You should write at least 250 words. This is really tough because lots of parameters involved in. yes, the character of everybody made on their childhood and mainly during their students. Therefore they can get more effects from their friends sometimes more than family, their point of view to the life is starting from that time and honestly I think friends are more important in this situation. Students stay together at least 6 hours per day and sometimes they are in touch together after school time, they feel comfort together sometimes more than family and here is the point. I believe family should take care of children by helping them to find the best possible character and point of view to the life, to better understand and deal with environment and challenges. Off course family can be more effective if you make positive environment for students, means all environment character is close together and trying to make positive progress and ideas. If you don’t care of school environment then sometimes you have to fight with negative ideas coming from disruptive school students, we are not always powerful in such a challenges because sometimes we don’t have enough time to spend with our children. The point is, if we don’t have enough money to change the school then we have to supervise our children and friends behavior and warn them in case needed, spend more time together to be effective, understand each other feeling and trying to give them enough space to make small mistakes, and so on … Even you choose better available schools again you have to do above mentioned procedure but with less pressure and conerns.
  4. This is my essay , please have a look : There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the national music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Nowadays various types of music are existed around the world. Depends on increasing different types of music, one question comes into mind that why we are demanding it? And is National music more preference than international one that have being all over the world? To answer these questions we’d better to concentrate on each types of music individually. I’m interested in both of them. I have many memorable things with traditional music and in contrast I make many friends with international music, so I’m interested in both of them We listen to the music with various tensions, it’s completely related to our spiritual condition, and obviously reveal our aspect, for example in sorrow condition we ought to listen to the calm and sad music or in other hand in celebs we desire to listen joyful music, therefore it’s completely related to our psych. national music exhibit traditional of a country and it’s a way to scatter their culture out to the other nationalities, it’s calmative music that retain culture and customs from one age to another, for example Irish music. Nowadays all over the words get familiar with their ceremonies and culture because they spread it by their traditional music. In other hand international music as pop music is a general music which everyone around the world at least listen to ten number of it. The fan of this kind of music is greater because all universes have one thing in common together and it’s international music. This kind of music close people together they can communicate and debate together. In conclusion, we need music in our lifestyle. We can be fresh with it. We find many friend so people close together by music.
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    IELTS TASK 1

    Dears i wrote another essay for academic task 1 , I would be appreciated if you guide me or tell me my mistakes . The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information below. Both following bar and pie charts illustrate the conclusion of mature instruction. The Bar chart demonstrate causes that why mature people going to study. The Second one illustrate people’s views in adult education expenses which should be shared. Adult decided to study for different reasons which is related to different point of view and also different positions. Majority of them desire to increase their level of education to gain qualification or are interested in specific subject, this group believe that it should be pay by their own individually, Around average of them study for particular target like improving in prospects of promotion, enhancing in current job and enjoy learning and study which are think that It should be pay by employer, and the minimum range of adult study to find a way to alter their job or to meet new friends, that they think it should be pay because of taxpayer. Thank you in advance:)
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    writing - Task 1

    That's very helpful ... you know i think my weakness is lacking of idea ... i know how to write introduction but don't know how to write body to get more score ... i will working on it . Thank a million .
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    writing - Task 1

    could someone please rate me for following writing ? The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. The flowchart illustrates how the Australian bureau of meteorology provides the latest information on the climate conditions by using different sources of data for broadcasting trustworthy forecasts. At the initial stage updated information collected by three different ways, from satellite in space, radar on the ground and drifting buoy from the sea. On the next stage they must analyze and process assembled raw data to do clarification from satellite photos, radar screen and synoptic charts and then preparing for broadcasting. After finishing the preparation section, it’s time to emission final information to the media, consist of TV newsreaders, radio programs or recorded announcement for letting users know. thanks
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