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For the first time i am writing an rssay. it was timed.Please score my essay and let me know what all glitches it has. Issue topic-People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. People should know how to make decisions as its a very important part of our lives.Future is the result of the decisions you make today and have made in the past.There are some people who make decisions for the sake of their emotions and some people wrack their brains before making a step.If one wants to succeed in life should make his/her decisions wisely,logically and keeping the possible outcomes,consequences coming out of it in his/her mind. First,some principals and teachers banish their students for making inappropriate actions in schools out of anger.But do they think about the effects students will carry for making such decisions?,No.After banishment teacher give copious reasons like,such actions are against the rules of institution,it might influence other students to perform the same or greater than this and many more.Since the birth, parents and teachers try to make that child into a wise and benign person by inculcating good habits.So,they should forgive such students and try to make them understand why such actions are not acceptable by our society in order to inculcate importance of decorum in them. Second,in today's world couples face so many problems in their lives,some of them end getting a divorce without thinking how this decision might affect our families,sons,daughters and friends.By making such decision they make their beloved ones fall prays for sorrow and grief. In conclusion,our lives are not independent,they are connected to the people we everyday meet and live with.Being emotional as an integral part of human behaviour is acceptable under difficult conditions and unfavorable circumstances.But we shouldn't forget what parents and teachers have been teaching us till now and try to live a life without regrets by making decisions with all the acumen we have in us by examining the ultimate results of our actions.