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Hi Pete, Thanks for your suggestion. I will certainly work on these points . However, if you can provide bands for this essay, it will be helpful for me.

Hello, I would be highly grateful if you rate my below essay. Topic: Today people have unhealthy diet and do not exercise. What do you think why it is so. what are the reasons.Suggest some solutions to solve this situation Over the past few years, advancement in technology has made human life easy and more comfortable;however, it has made some detrimental impact on people's life such as they tend to eat unhealthy food and do less workouts. In this essay I will find out its reasons and try to draw some solutions to minimize its negative impacts on human's life. To begin with, the main resaon for people's unhealthy lifestyle is too much workload in the office. This means they have to work for extra hours in the office and so they cannot spare enough time to make food for themselves at home;eventually inadvertibly they opt for fast food or other ready made package food for them because they are ready to make and tasty despite unhealthy.Another complelling reason is technological advancement which affects greaty to human's life.For example, few years ago people tend to walk some distance to reach their office, when they commute to their work place and now almost everyone has car so that they have to least walking. Additionally,home appliances such as advanced dishwasher, microwave oven , and many more have made physical work for a man unlike some years ago.Hence, their passive form of excersises has been increasingly reduced. There are few solutions to mitigate the situation. Firstly, individuals should be made known via health awareness programs by the government about benifits of healthy diet and detrimental effect of junk food and readymade package food.Moreover, the authority ought to emphasize on buiding more gyms at a nominal fees in each city so that more people take benifit of them. Secondly, the government should mandate physical education starting from the primary education and they should be graded with their examiniation with sports performance along with their academic so that pupils encouraged about their health from their childhood. Finally, the government should enfroce strigent employment laws that help people to reduce their over time work and make their work life balance. In Conclusion, people living unhealthy life style owing to extra workload given by their employers and advances in technology. However, to curb this situation, the government come forward for the society by providing education and awareness.

Hi, Thanks for assessing my essay. Could you please let me know more about " missing words and reference markers (e.g. last sentence)". And if you could provide IELTS band (as I cannot judge my self even seeing band descriptor), I would be highly obliged to you.

Hello, I would be highly grateful if you rate my below essay. Q: Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train, or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion. Ans. Over the last few years, the means of transportation has been increased by public within the cities around the world. Few individuals choose to travel by their own vehicle like car. However, the others opt for public transportation like train, bus or metro rails.Both these type of transportation has its own benefits and drawbacks. In this essay I will discuss it and try to provide my opinion. To begin with, If a person uses his own transportation then he will not need to wait for the availability for the vehicle unlike public transportation. Also he can reach to the destination quickly if the requirement as he may increase the speed of his vehicle.Generally speaking , people who are travel by their own vehicle , reach their target on time and therefore they are more punctual. Thus, people find private transportation is more reliable and faster way to travel from source place to destination place. On the other hand, people, who use public transportation , can experience their travelling with ease because they do not have to worry about the stringent traffic and driving rules. In fact they can listen to their favourite music or check their official emails via smartphones or even they can read the newspaper also. Additionally, public transportation costs lower than the private transportation. What is more, public transportation carry many people at the same time so it makes low pollution compared to private travelling. Hence, public transportation is considered as continent, cost effective and environment friendly travelling. In conclusion, although private transportation provides less travel time and quick access to vehicle , I believe , public transportation is far better than it in terms of the convenience and incurred cost of travelling.