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It is actually very great Donna, I don't know how to thank you. Anything in this time would be helpful. I am studying by myself and I am not sure where I am. your correction showed me my faults. Thanks

Hi Donna. Are you preparing yourselves for TOEFL? This forum seems abandoned. Do you want to help each other? Thanks

Hi friends. I would appreciate it if you took time and just read this sentences. Until now, 45 person read my post, and none of them put a comment. If we want to learn something and become succeed, we must help ourselves.I tried to put some comments on other posts but nobody accompanied me. I really need your advises and suggestions. So, Is there anybody in this forum to help? Thanks friends.

Hi mamal. I read your essay and there are some points, which are better to consider them, However, it is not my place to rate your essay, I am not a professional. 1-There are some misspell words, for example, discribe, actualy... 2- In some places you forgot to write plural 's'. for instance, ten new friends, 3- Some of your sentences are to lengthy. It is better to keep them short and simple. For instance you have just two sentences in your introduction. 4- There are some inconsistency between your subject and your verb. For example read your second reason. 5- In my opinion, your conclusion is not enough. you can do it better that this. I hope these points can help you. Good Luck

Hi Kjianjinq. you pointed out some functional reasons and this part was okay. However, There are some problems from my sight: 1- Your word count is even less than the minimum. If you want to gain a higher score, you must increase your total word count. 2: Explain more. I mean, give examples or use specific explanation. 3-There are some other points, which I marked them in your essay. 4-you need to write your conclusion more lengthy. 5- I believe that 4 paragraph essay is better than 5 paragraph because you have more time to develop your opinions and explain them in details. 6-I cannot rate because I am also a student with a little English knowledge. Thus, I just wrote some of my view points. 7- Good Luck.

Hi everybody. This is my first post. I have recently found this wonderful forum. My exam is on 21 may and I really need your help to evaluate myself. Thanks a lot. Do you agree or disagree? Some people say that the Internet provides people with lots of valuable information.Others think access to so much information creates problems.Which view do you agree? Nowadays the Internet becomes one of the important parts of every human being. People tend to do most of their jobs through the Internet. Moreover, it contains so much information that if we spent whole of our life to look into it, we could not look at all its information. Some people believe that this huge amount of information create problems; while others hold a completely different idea and believe that these information are valuable. In my opinion, the Internet is containing lots of vital information and it does not create any problem. In the rest of this essay, I will illustrate two reasons for my opinion. The main reason is that with this amount of information we will not face any problem when we are doing a scientific research. Before the Internet became this much popular, people were going to the libraries and bookstores to find a book or an article and sometimes they failed to find their needs. However, today people just search through the Internet and find whatever they want without any problem. For instance, last year I was working on my thesis. I could not find any of my necessary sources for completing my research in university's library. Therefore, I searched them in the Internet and could access them as easily as possible. As you can see, these amounts of information are actually an advantage for the Internet over other sources of information. Another reason is that there are some advances technologies now, which can solve this problem. One thing that can help us with this amount of information is an assistant that can help us find our proper and needed information. Recommender systems are one of these assistants. These systems use different methods and strategies to find what users need. For example, I found a news recommender, which suggests news to users based on their past historical usage. In other world, it tells users which news article they must read based on the articles that they liked before. As a result, we can see that these huge amounts of information are no longer a problem. In sum, from my sight people would not face any problem because of the amount of information. I described two reasons for my opinion. First, this much information help people during their research. This feature actually is crucial for them. Second, there are different technologies that aid users to find their proper information.