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  1. "Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems." Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged. The medical advances and conveniences awarded to us by developments in science and technology are nothing to scoff at. However, science and technology will not be able to solve all of society's problems. One of the most prevailing societal issues is bigotry. It is expressed in many ways, and one of the biggest ways that it is expressed is through legislation. Recently, a number of states have brought bills to the floor that directly attack queer and trans citizens. These bills will affect the ability of trans people to access gender-affirming medical care and live freely as themselves. This hatred is not something that science and technology will be able to solve, as science and technology cannot change the hearts of bigoted individuals. The types of conveniences that are given to us from scientific and technological research is primarily distributed based on class. When genetic engineering was a hot-button topic, it was clear that it was a luxury that would not be afforded to lower-class individuals. It is even evident in the process of in-vitro fertilization. Upper-class people are able to pay for the sessions that will allow them to get pregnant and have a child in the way that they want. However, if a lower class individual is having difficulty getting pregnant, this luxury is not afforded to them. This is another problem that science and technology would not be able to solve on their own. There have been a myriad of medical advances that have resulted in an increase in life expectancy and quality of life altogether. For example, HIV was one of the most prevalent causes of death in the 1980s and 1990s. A large portion of generations were wiped away due to this virus. Since then, through medical research, that have been multiple treatments developed that include anti-retroviral therapies, as well as preventative measures, like PreP. Now, being HIV-positive is not the death sentence it used to be, and more people are able to live normal lives even-though they are HIV-positive. This is a large problem that science and technology has defeated. However, access to these treatments still prioritizes those with health insurance and financial means. Scientific and technological research has been able to significantly improve health and our daily lives. However, it will not be able to solve the problems that are born from the human mind, such as hatred of others and unequal distribution of wealth.
  2. Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses. The argument is flawed for the following reasons: the assumption that the physiology of early hominids and present day humans are the same, the use of anecdotal evidence to show how beneficial the paleo diet can be for us, and the use of vague language regarding the paleo diet's proposed health benefits. Primarily, the argument makes the assumption that early hominids and present-day humans have the exact same physiology, and that, therefore, a paleo diet should have the same effect. This is flawed because we do not live in the same environment as early hominids, and, furthermore, even our whole foods are still very processed, and so a paleo diet that would have been consumed by early hominids is not the same as the paleo diet we would currently consume. To strengthen this argument, there should have been clarification about what aspects of our physiology is the same in order to make the argument that a paleo diet consumed by early hominids would be beneficial to us. The argument also uses anecdotal evidence from people who are currently on the paleo diet as proof of its benefits. One would have to think about who is willing to answer a survey on this topic. Only people who feel very strongly would be willing to answer a survey on it, and individual people are not medical experts who can attest to the presence of metabolic or inflammatory diseases. In order to strengthen this argument, the author should have included evidence peer-reviewed studies that showed a significant difference in metabolic and inflammatory diseases between individuals on the paleo diet and healthy controls. Finally, the argument also uses vague language to convince readers of the benefits of a paleo diet. It uses phrases such as "health-promoting nutrients," and argues that the paleo diet "can cure many chronic illnesses." This language does not specify the ways in which the paleo diet has been proven to be beneficial. What does it mean for a nutrient to be health-promoting? This language is not specific enough to show how beneficial a paleo diet may be. There are many chronic illnesses that are not tied to diet, so the author cannot be so sure that there are many chronic illnesses that would be completely eradicated with the introduction of a paleo diet. Within the argument the author has specified the ways in which a paleo diet may help, but does not provide any real data. The way to strengthen this argument, the author should have specified the ways in which a paleo diet has been proven to improve health. The argument was flawed in the following ways: it made assumptions about the similarities between the conditions and physiology of the early hominid body and the body of the present-day human being, it used anecdotal evidence instead of peer-reviewed research, and it used vague language to convince readers of the benefits of the paleo diet.
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